1 Topic by weedjie (edited by weedjie 2007-05-22 06:25:18)

  • From: Glasgow
  • Registered: 2007-02-27
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Topic: just new to this malarkey so here goes my first attempt.its moody.

Melting Heart.  Capo 2nd fret.
Intro: c, cmaj7, c
           
fmaj7        cmaj7         
I love you, I love you ,
fmaj7       cmaj7
I love you, I love you,
Em                E                   
and i cant let you go
Am        fmaj7
without telling you so
           cmaj7      fmaj7       
I love you, yes i do ,
cmaj7         fmaj7
I love you, and its true,
Em                E                   
and i dont want to hide
Am                fmaj7
these feelings i have inside
            cmaj7       fmaj7       
are for you, yes its true,
cmaj7       fmaj7
i love you, yes i do,

middle: Am, G7, G, Em,
            E, Am, Fmaj7, cmaj7,

Em                E                   
And when your by my side
Am                fmaj7
i whisper to you that i
           cmaj7       fmaj7       
love you, my baby boo,
cmaj7         fmaj7
yes its true, i love you
Em                E                   
so baby what you scared of
Am               fmaj7
overdose on my love,
           cmaj7       fmaj7       
cos its true, my world is blue,
cmaj7         fmaj7 
oh yeaaaah, i love you.  end on a slow c.


any feedback would be well appreciated guys an gals.

Don't Cry because it is over...

    smile because it happened.    Gabriel García Marquez

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  • Registered: 2007-05-22
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Re: just new to this malarkey so here goes my first attempt.its moody.

hey weedjie its a cute song...how old are you?...nice attempt....my first song was something like that too but you'll get better on the way..
goodluck
saba

love is like a violin, the music may stop now and then but the strings remain forever...
  • From: Wilkes, Georgia
  • Registered: 2007-05-08
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Re: just new to this malarkey so here goes my first attempt.its moody.

Hey man...You're well on your way to a songwriting career! Keep workin at it and writing a lot....even if you get an idea in Mcdonald's (i have!), go write it on a napkin and when you get home go from there..Good Luck!

"Fly on Proud Bird, At Last You Are Free"
-Charlie Daniels
  • Registered: 2007-05-18
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Re: just new to this malarkey so here goes my first attempt.its moody.

HEY
DUDE!!! i wish i was as good as u at song writing. but you do need a peaceful room to write
not like me ( my last song i wrote i did in the car with my friend with his 5 year old brother climbing on me and trying to kill me!)but yeah awsome song dude!!:):) i like it smile:)