Topic: Her Kiss

Hey! These are the lyrics for a song that hopefully will be on my new album!

Her kiss like venom
Her serpentine eyes bite with lust
Her smile
Her sweetest sin

Think now the times you lied
Remember when you cried
Drink the cyanide

Her pale white skin
In the coffin
The only thing to keep me alive
and the only thing to kill me

Think now the times you lied
Remember when you cried
Drink the cyanide

Re: Her Kiss

Hi mightytyger
Thanks for your contributions to the songwriting section.
The words are fine but as you have not added the chords to your songs they they must be considered poems. Please read the sticky at the top of the Songwriting forum about this.
If you edit the posts and add the chords then they can stay in the songwriting forum. If not then they will be moved to the poem section.
Thanks
ark

Re: Her Kiss

ok ark thank you!