1 Topic by mightytyger (edited by mightytyger 2010-08-31 02:51:19)

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Topic: Working on new album need song writing help!!

Hey everyone! This is my first post on this section of the forums! I'm working on a new album and need help with this song.
ok so this song is centered on Harley quinn and the joker i have the chords down. but need lyrical help! this is all i have thus far and its not much

If I'll be your clark kent
Would you be my louis lane
fgnalsfklmadslkfmlas
dkfmlakfmlksmdfls

then chorus

then verse

chorus

please HELP!!!

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Re: Working on new album need song writing help!!

I dont know how to improve on your fgnalsfklmadslkfmlas
dkfmlakfmlksmdfls lyrics sounds fine to me smile

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Re: Working on new album need song writing help!!

haha =] thanks

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Re: Working on new album need song writing help!!

Do you want it to rhyme?
Serious or humourous?

  • From: WA
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Re: Working on new album need song writing help!!

im wanna go for serious with maybe a little humor. im just having trouble with where to go from the first 2 lines

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Re: Working on new album need song writing help!!

hi mickey it looks like you need to watch a few superman films to get some idea's,
if i'll be your clark kent,
would you be my lois lane,
my love would reach around the world,
and into outer space.

chorus
so fly superman fly,
go and save the world,
i'll still be waiting here,
my love flame still burns.

here's a idea to expand on if you want to use it,have fun....stay cool

love is life ,life is for love,keep a true heart and live life to the full....stay cool

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Re: Working on new album need song writing help!!

without my cape
it's me just the same

Now I work down at the car wash where all it ever does is rain.

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Re: Working on new album need song writing help!!

....IF I WAS A LION
YOU COULD BE MY MANE.

IF I WAS MADE OF CREAM CHEESE
I'D BE THE MAN UPON THE MOON
THEN WE COULD MAKE HISTORY
YOU'D BE THE GIRL THERE TOO


just how lennonesque do you wanna get?

phill

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Re: Working on new album need song writing help!!

haha thanks alot guys! my mind is boomin with ideas i will post back with the full song and chords maybe a demo!!!

10 Reply by dbernhar (edited by dbernhar 2010-09-16 23:14:14)

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Re: Working on new album need song writing help!!

Whats crackin Tiger,

I really liked the intro lines and wrote a whole song based on it.  I love the superman saga and the characters.  Feel free to use any of these ideas if you want, I hope it's ok that I stole your first two lines to make my own. 

Clark KentMusic by Dan Bernhardt.  Lyrics by Dan Bernhardt and Mighty Tiger


[F]If I’ll be your Clark Kent [G]


[F]Would you be my Lois Lane? [G]


[F]If I’m your superman[G]


[F]Would you write a [B7]story about me?




[Em]If I fly to Jupiter[D]


[Em]Would you cling to my [D]cape?


[Em]Kiss me on Neptune [D]


[Em]But not till our second or [G]third date




[Am]I pretend I’m [C]average


[D]But I’m a [F]hero inside


[Am]If all I [C]have is your love



[D]Nothing can stop me, [G]not even kryptonite!


[F]I’ll be your Clark Kent [G]


[F]If you’ll be my Lois Lane [G]


[F]If I’m your superman[G]


[F]Would you write a [B7]story about me?


[Em]Lex Luther wanted you, [D]


[Em]but he don't know a thing [D]


[Em]He may have suit appeal [D]


But [C]he can't compete with the [A7]Man of Steel


[F]I’ll be your Clark Kent [G]


[F]If you’ll be my Lois Lane [G]


[F]If I’m your superman[G]


[F]Would you write a [G]story about me?[C]


Music is my savior/I was maimed by Rock and Roll/I was tamed by Rock and Roll/I got my name/From Rock and Roll

-Jeff Tweedy

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