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Topic: A Cheep Hotel Room

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A Cheap Hotel RoomBy Wayne Fiala


[C]Fancy Ballroom, Chande[F]liers, Champagne by candle [C]light.


We both married money now we [G7]live a priviliged [C]life.


Evening gown, diamond rings, [F]long black limou[C]sines.


Tonight, we met each other.Was it [G7]love or just a [C]fling?




I notice [F]you and I see the [C]way you look at me.


This attraction is it chance or [G7]was it ment to [C]be?


Outside, on the terrace we chat a [F]while, and the closer we [C]get.


Wonder why we're not in each [G7]others arms [C]yet.


Fancy [F]Ballroom, Chandeliers, we danced [C]under crystal lights.


Now we'll dance on the terrace beneath a [G7]Gypsy Moon to[C]night.




I wait out by the limo sip my [G7]drink wonder where you're [C]at.


I wonder why we're not in each [G7]others arms [C]yet.



I have the driver park the lemo some-[F]place out of [C]sight.


Now we'll try to find love in a cheap [G7]hotel room to[C]night.


Evening [F]gown, diamond rings, [C]long black limousines.


Tonight we say words of [G7]love, to each other we don't [C]mean.


Now we lie here by each other [F]smoke a ciga[C]rette.


Knowing what we've done some [G7]day we'll both re[C]gret.


Fancy [F]Ballroom, Candeliers, we danced [C]under crystal lights.


And we danced alone together beneath a [G7]Gypsy Moon to[C]night.


Evening [F]gown, diamond rings, [C]long black limousines.


Tonight we loved each other but it [G7]wasn't what it [C]seamed.


It was [F]wrong and we knew it but some[C]how it seam so right.


And we took an extra privilige in a cheap [G7]hotel room to[C]night.


Yes we got to know each other in a cheap [G7]hotel room to[C]night


We walked away from each other and a cheap [G7]hotel room last-[C]night


  • KAP54
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Re: A Cheep Hotel Room

Nice Write Jody smile

Too bad "Gypsy Moon Tonight" is a already a good song out there, it would have made a great title for this.

This has a good flow to it and tells a good story, Looking forwards to the recording. smile

Cheers

Kenny

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Re: A Cheep Hotel Room

Hello Jody Wayne,

Your songs are like wee drama's. Always  vivid  and enjoyable to read.

Thank You"

Hows the voice doing now sir ? I hope your singing like a lark sir big_smile

Old Doll.

Why Blend in with the Crowd ? When you were made to stand out !

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Re: A Cheep Hotel Room

KAP54 wrote:

Nice Write Jody smile

Too bad "Gypsy Moon Tonight" is a already a good song out there, it would have made a great title for this.

This has a good flow to it and tells a good story, Looking forwards to the recording. smile

Cheers

Kenny

Hi Kenny,
Good to hear from you.  I hope you are well.  I would probably get more people looking with a "Gypsy" kinda name.  Thanks for the complaments.  My voice comes and go's.  When I have a good voice day,   I'll try to record this.  I'll let you know.  By the way, this is actually a fun song to sing.  It makes you feel rich and naughty for a little while.  lol wink

Take care,
jodyW

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Re: A Cheep Hotel Room

Old Doll wrote:

Hello Jody Wayne,

Your songs are like wee drama's. Always  vivid  and enjoyable to read.

Thank You"

Hows the voice doing now sir ? I hope your singing like a lark sir big_smile

Old Doll.

Hi Lena,
It is a pleasure to hear from you.  Thank you very much for the complements.  My voice comes and gos.  Some time it's good enough to sing a song or two, but most of the time not.  Thanks for asking.

You take care now.
jodyW

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Re: A Cheep Hotel Room

Hey Jody
Excellent story telling again in a song..
Thanks for sharing.
ark

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Re: A Cheep Hotel Room

arkady wrote:

Hey Jody
Excellent story telling again in a song..
Thanks for sharing.
ark

Hi ark,
Thanks for stopping in.  It's good to hear from you.  Thanks for the kind words.

Take care,
jodyW