1 2010-04-23 17:08:25 (edited by Jody Wayne 2010-04-27 17:33:44)
Re: Would You Dance With Me Tonignt V2
Kenny is right! I just played it. Much better.
Thanks Kenny,
jodyWayne
Re: Would You Dance With Me Tonignt V2
There ya go Jody,
Reading it is so much easier when it is typed like it's played.
Don't be afraid to come back and change your lyrics when you feel they're not right. As the melody grows and the song gets tighter you'll find the edit button real handy.
Cheers and Nice Write
Kenny
P.S. I'm not necessarily right, it's just my point of view.
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4 2010-04-23 22:06:53 (edited by Jody Wayne 2010-04-23 22:07:16)
Re: Would You Dance With Me Tonignt V2
Well Kenny, your point of view just happened to be right this time.
"Sad country songs always make me cry" is a lot better now too.
I did the same thing there I did here. Who said you can't teach
an old guy a new trick?
Thanks again,
jody
Re: Would You Dance With Me Tonignt V2
I believe ive already told you how good i think this is sir.
This was in answer to my song i wrote some years ago now. I do like it.
Could i ask you to put your utube url here.. you just paste it to your profile . Its so much easier to click on the link
here to youtube,
Thanks Jody , well done again sir.
Old Doll.
Re: Would You Dance With Me Tonignt V2
I believe ive already told you how good i think this is sir.
This was in answer to my song i wrote some years ago now. I do like it.
Could i ask you to put your utube url here.. you just paste it to your profile . Its so much easier to click on the link
here to youtube,Thanks Jody , well done again sir.
Old Doll.
Hi Old Doll,
How are you? Okay I hope. Yes you did comment on this one. I reposted this one as a version two because Kenny brought it to my attention that the fourth verse was out of place or something. I moved it, and made it the last verse. I think that fixed the problem. I'll take care of that URL soon.
As always it's a pleasure to hear from you.
jodyWayne