1 (edited by gitaardocphil 2010-01-07 15:16:34)

Topic: THE DEVIL'S PLAY

Go electric, distortion, THIS IS HARD ROCK and you can improvise a lot, the rest will follow.
Start in open chord, then A, then E on the highest fret, down to the 5th, to the 7th and back to the 2nd, and open, open, and again open on the 15th fret. Same with the Dchord, go up and down. Use
a lot of licks and riffs.
Since I am working on the lyrics, just a taste, & test: PLEASE GIVE ME CRITICS.
Progression has been made, but to put the chords from down to high and back, they are complicated, I will put them all together, without lyrics.

THE DEVIL’S PLAY

THE DEVIL’S PLAYrockdoc


[A]I woke up this[A] morning and [A]I thought I was dead[A]


[A]I saw the devil[A] sitting on the[A] edge of my bed[A]


[D]He had seen[D] my guitars[D] and told me this[D]


[D]I’m gonna teach[G] you to[A] play with [D]a devil’s kiss[G] [D] [A]





The room had a smell, sulfur and tar and before that kiss


I shouted loud will I be a master in guitar and the best there is





[color=blue]- GITAARDOCPHIL SAIS: TO CONQUER DEAD, YOU HAVE TO DIE[/color]   AND [color=blue] we are born to die[/color]
- MY GUITAR PLAYS EVERY STYLE = BLUES, ROCK, METAL, so I NEED TO LEARN HOW TO PLAY IT.
[color=blue]Civilization began the first time an angry person cast a word instead of a rock.[/color]

Re: THE DEVIL'S PLAY

hi phill i think that verse is wicked if thats a sample the rest will be brilliant,can't wait to see/hear it,well done.....stay cool

love is life ,life is for love,keep a true heart and live life to the full....stay cool

Re: THE DEVIL'S PLAY

ok lieven, you wanted critique? so here it is, i like rock, and i like the words, so all i can say is....change "learn" to "teach"eg:

i'm gonna teach you to play with a devil's kiss..

not a big change, but it is more grammatical...

phill

Ask not what Chordie can do for you, but what you can do for Chordie.

4 (edited by gitaardocphil 2010-01-05 17:25:13)

Re: THE DEVIL'S PLAY

Done, but it's a mess to put all the chords in a more logical sequence.
This is funny, I 'm writing very slow, when I want, lyrics and chords, but SUGGESTIONS are welcome. It has to be a mysterious song.

[color=blue]- GITAARDOCPHIL SAIS: TO CONQUER DEAD, YOU HAVE TO DIE[/color]   AND [color=blue] we are born to die[/color]
- MY GUITAR PLAYS EVERY STYLE = BLUES, ROCK, METAL, so I NEED TO LEARN HOW TO PLAY IT.
[color=blue]Civilization began the first time an angry person cast a word instead of a rock.[/color]

5 (edited by gitaardocphil 2010-01-07 15:27:36)

Re: THE DEVIL'S PLAY

THE DEVIL’S PLAY


Chordpro error: The song does not contain chords. Please include at least two chords in brackets within the text, like this: [C7].



This are E D chords, but the sequence: start in A and going high up your fretboard.
{st:the devil's play}
{t:rockdoc}


Chordpro error: This is not a valid artistname. You will have to specify an artistname in the form {st: Artistname} in the beginning of the code.

[color=blue]- GITAARDOCPHIL SAIS: TO CONQUER DEAD, YOU HAVE TO DIE[/color]   AND [color=blue] we are born to die[/color]
- MY GUITAR PLAYS EVERY STYLE = BLUES, ROCK, METAL, so I NEED TO LEARN HOW TO PLAY IT.
[color=blue]Civilization began the first time an angry person cast a word instead of a rock.[/color]