Topic: Something unknown to some

My Tennessee Darling                                                                              m.mcvicker 2008


I met the man
some many years ago.,
in the New York bus station terminal.
He said to me, I need some change, can you help me out?
I said, “Well stranger, I’m a bit strapped it seems, but it looks like I can do this for you.â€
Then he told me, as he was leavin’,  that he would be right back.
I said , Sure, I’ll be seein’ ya then.â€
and as I stayed there and was watchin’, the people comin’ an’ goin’
I thought at least , I may have entertained an Angel, unknown.

But then, he showed up
with a bottle..
and two Styrofoam cups
and we sat in the hall ways
drank the cheap rosy wine that he bought.
Then he told me that  he wrote it…
I said , sure, there was no way
He laughed and he said ,:“you just watch thisâ€

When the bottle was finished…. he poked me in the ribs
and glided  up to; two lovely women walking by
He started the tune;
walked beside them and crooned
I believed every word that he sang
by the time he was thru they were looking at the moon
and the tune,… carried them all along their way.

This  is true; and I say this , to you:

So I say, Angels unknown
the things we are shown
If we just take time to see
But I want you to know
The things you show, to me,
and you feel alone?
We will waltz, the Tennessee…

I was dancing with my Darling ; 
When a stranger she happen to see……….

I thought ; If I had one idea,
and took it from beginning to end.
I would try another.

Re: Something unknown to some

A great write, real food for thought.

Keep on Rocking and remember Animals Feel Pain Too.

Re: Something unknown to some

hi marc, welcome back, aint seen ya in a while?

very entertaining write almost an oratory.

nice one

phill

Ask not what Chordie can do for you, but what you can do for Chordie.

Re: Something unknown to some

Marcalan,

Thats such a great song, The Tennessee Waltz"    you created the scene perfectly.

Beautifully written as always, I dont know why you dont post some more of your work.

You have a very distinctive style.

GR

Why Blend in with the Crowd ? When you were made to stand out !

Re: Something unknown to some

thanks for your encouragment Lena
Phil this is actually a true story

I thought ; If I had one idea,
and took it from beginning to end.
I would try another.

Re: Something unknown to some

Marcalan,

I hope you have a brilliant Thanksgiving with your family and your Irish son in law Jimmy.

Im so jealous your gonna be eating all Jimmies lovely food.

Ask him to put some new ideas for starters  for christmas on his site .
This one.
http://thebelfastchef.blogspot.com/2009 … -iron.html

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=79Nb97iyZug

Have a blast.
Sláinte.

Why Blend in with the Crowd ? When you were made to stand out !

Re: Something unknown to some

was completely lost and oblivious to my surroundings whiles watering my eyes on this narrative.never heard of the song though but love the style of writing.Keep it up and God bless!!!