• From: Chico, Ca.
  • Registered: 2007-09-08
  • Posts: 327

Topic: IT'S BEEN AWHILE

I havent posted for a while , Here's one I think is new to some

A Well Worn Face                                                    mcvicker 9-9-09


The times are shown like a face well worn
when you’re young and when you’re  new
some can see the lace around your eyes
that say ahhhh, I know you threw.

oh the trouble, but the
fun that you bring
all of  us sing to the crazy laughter that you create
And as years go by
those kisses around your eyes
Bring on a well worn face

And hard times too
We see our way through
ask Ollie Bolger, he knows its true
but he loves his friends and they love him.
we have to walk and lead our horse thru town

Good loving family and
Hard times and good ,
Brings on a well worn face

The cross we bear from this world
And through Christ our Lord
He knows this well
and He loves a well worn face!

I thought ; If I had one idea,
and took it from beginning to end.
I would try another.

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  • dino48
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  • From: los banos,california
  • Registered: 2007-04-06
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Re: IT'S BEEN AWHILE

Hi marcalan,I am not one who looks at poetry much,but I have to say that you have done a good job with the words in this fine piece.

my papy said son your going too drive me too drinking if you dont stop driving that   Hot  Rod  Lincoln!! Cmdr cody and his lost planet airman
  • From: The Land Of Song
  • Registered: 2007-12-10
  • Posts: 5,695

Re: IT'S BEEN AWHILE

i would guess there's a story behind this; Ollie Bolger?

you have a great way with words, let's have more.


phill

Ask not what Chordie can do for you, but what you can do for Chordie.

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  • From: Chico, Ca.
  • Registered: 2007-09-08
  • Posts: 327

Re: IT'S BEEN AWHILE

Ah thanks you two

I thought ; If I had one idea,
and took it from beginning to end.
I would try another.

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  • Registered: 2007-04-03
  • Posts: 3,489

Re: IT'S BEEN AWHILE

Oh so good my friend,

I do love your usage of simplicity to state a multitude. Its a fine piece. It reminds me
of all the laces around me own eyes at this stage of life. I wear them with pride lol i earned some of  them,
through real  sad  and good ole laughter times.

Love to you and your Visitors. Enjoy enjoy.

Old Doll

Why Blend in with the Crowd ? When you were made to stand out !

6 Reply by marcalan (edited by marcalan 2009-11-07 18:25:26)

  • From: Chico, Ca.
  • Registered: 2007-09-08
  • Posts: 327

Re: IT'S BEEN AWHILE

Thank you Silver Seoda,
ag tnúth le cuairt a thabhairt

I thought ; If I had one idea,
and took it from beginning to end.
I would try another.

marcalan's Website

  • Registered: 2007-04-03
  • Posts: 3,489

Re: IT'S BEEN AWHILE

Go Háliann. Mait an fear!

Ar riachtanais Do ghramadach a shocrú. Ach do déanamh go han-mhaith MO Cara. a bheidh tú ag labhairt nós Paddy in aon am.  lol lol


Doll d'aois

Why Blend in with the Crowd ? When you were made to stand out !
  • From: Chico, Ca.
  • Registered: 2007-09-08
  • Posts: 327

Re: IT'S BEEN AWHILE

sin leithscéal

I thought ; If I had one idea,
and took it from beginning to end.
I would try another.

marcalan's Website