Topic: Please help with words

I have a song melody that I quiet like but for the life of me I cannot find the right words to go with it.
Please cick the link to hear the song
http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm?fu … =498977818
If you can help I would be very gratetfull
TonyBlue

man is the dream of the doliphin

Re: Please help with words

Blast.  Forgot to tell which one, it is listed as "Home ?"
Sorry
TonyBlue

man is the dream of the doliphin

Re: Please help with words

Tony you might want to edit out the word (the offending word has now been ameded) from your post lots of (younger viewers) smile

"Growing old is not for sissies"

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Ive listened to this , no Joy Sir,

Any other lyrics at all in you head about this piece ?

Old Dolll.

Why Blend in with the Crowd ? When you were made to stand out !

Re: Please help with words

sorry Russell, point taken.

Old Doll, to me the song seems quite sad, I came up with the title from the words that I had writen, as follows.
intro
C/ / / / F                                                                 C
           I'v been walking down a long and lonely road, without you, by my side.
C/ / / /F                                                           C
          I'v been thinking about our lives together, and if we really did try.
C/ / / /F                                                        C
          Could we have live our lives differently,   ?
another round of verse
G                        C
I'm coming home back to your arms X 4

hope this helps as i would really like to finish this song,  of course, I will give creidit to whom provides the words

thanks for your interest tonyblue

man is the dream of the doliphin

6 (edited by daddycool 2009-10-31 18:58:12)

Re: Please help with words

i've been walking down a long lonely road,                                          with-out you by my side,
i've been thinking about our lives together,                                         and if we really did try.

chorus
i'm coming home,back to your arms,
to the love of my life,
i'm coming home,back to your arms,
hoping that we shall never part.

could we have lived our lives differently,
can't we start over again,
things will be different,i know that now,
true love is for eternity.

chorus
i'm coming home,back to your arms,
to the love of my life,
i'm coming home,back to your arms,
hoping that we shall never part.

no more lonely nights and long lonely roads,
without you my life is o'er,
i'll never leave you alone again,
forever is the feeling in my heart.

chorus
i'm coming home,back to your arms,
to the love of my life,
i'm coming home,back to your arms,
hoping that we shall never part.


here you are tony have a bash at this,i have'nt listened to the sound just went by the start lines you provided,
you can alter it any way you wish,have fun....stay cool

love is life ,life is for love,keep a true heart and live life to the full....stay cool

Re: Please help with words

Thank you very muck Daddycol.
I now, with your help, I have the inspiration I was looking for.
TonyBlue

man is the dream of the doliphin

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hi tony my pleasure,lets have a recording to see how it sounds when you've finished it....stay cool

love is life ,life is for love,keep a true heart and live life to the full....stay cool

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Will do, but I'm off on holiday tomorrow,so it will take some time
tony

man is the dream of the doliphin