Topic: Cast in cold Iron. Helena Donovan 2009.

I wrote this while sipping tea one day  with my bro. There was an old cast Iron Bench outside the window. I collated my own thoughts to what i thought was the life of the bench.

Cast In Cold Iron.

Forged by heat, a cast iron seat
Your elegance looks out of place
What secrets you hold, bustled times to unfold
Sharing times now! No choices,  But shade.


You look sumptuous, ordained, scroll symbols arranged
A symphony of fleur- de -lis
Memorial to one? One who sat in the sun?
Watching croquet,  Sipping cool lemonade.


A small plastic bag, blown in on the wind
Has settled attached neath your frame
Collects slowly dripped rain, Weak sun infused rays
Casting prisms, to colour our day


An old rusty chain, has you shackled in place
Rusty lock that insults your finesse
I admire your grace, were both out of place
In this hustle called modern age


The artistic hands that once drew your plan
Would they scream? And rage at your fate
Your carbon in life, with graphite I write
A cupola, fierce burning pains.


One day I’ll return, sit with you in the sun
Spanning bridges, like alloys allied
Divides in between, death so obscene
Our sorrows! We cast in cold iron.

Old Doll.

Why Blend in with the Crowd ? When you were made to stand out !

Re: Cast in cold Iron. Helena Donovan 2009.

Hi Helena,

You have a wonderful way with words, I wish I had half your talent to be able to conjure up such imagery with my writings.

Roger

"Do, or do not; there is no try"

Re: Cast in cold Iron. Helena Donovan 2009.

I love that, great work.



segosha ...   Badeye.

one caper after another

Re: Cast in cold Iron. Helena Donovan 2009.

Hi Lena,

How you can take something as simplistic as a cast iron bench and tell a story with the grace you do is a pretty amazing thing to read. It takes a pretty special person to have the insight you show in your writings. big_smile Kudos

Big Time Welcome Back (Again lol)

Krazy Kenny in Kanada

Just Keepin on Keepin on
Martin DC15E
Cort MR710F
Squire Strat (Chinese)

Re: Cast in cold Iron. Helena Donovan 2009.

Again My appreciation to you all.

Your all so kind about my writings.  Stransongs, has  also sent this piece  to me this evening recorded.

Woo Hoo! How very kind of him to do so.

He just gave this ole gal a big smiley face. lol lol The recording of this piece sounds happier then i would have expected to  to music.
I have asked him to post here , so he may do so. The  Poor guy has a flu.

You know i recently had a meal with my son and some friends he met through Cyber. It was a great evening watching the interaction of people who never met face to face. I can only imagine A Chordie Meeting would be superb.

Thank You all. Special thanks to you stransongs for taking the time to record this piece. I love the very thought.

Old Doll.

Why Blend in with the Crowd ? When you were made to stand out !

Re: Cast in cold Iron. Helena Donovan 2009.

Doll, this is beautiful!  Your words are like strokes of a colorful and lovely oil painting, painted on our beloved Chordie palette.  A lovely piece of work.

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Re: Cast in cold Iron. Helena Donovan 2009.

OK, just for Lena

I use soundclick as a place to let songs decide whether they work or not. I can listen to them anytime, anywhere. They are mostly recorded on one mic so the quality is awful - but I'm not worried about that. Cast Iron Seat also suffers from me having caught the pig flu - so don't come too close to the screen !

This tune feels very kinks-like.

Chords are

E7 020100
C6 002010
C6add9 030210



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The recording is at http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default … dID=939007

"Don't play what's there, play what's not there." Miles Davis

Re: Cast in cold Iron. Helena Donovan 2009.

Ah brilliant Stransongs.

Thank you .Its actually a very catchy wee tune.

Just made my day sir.

From  South to the North of the Emerald, i hope the suns shining for you also.

Would ya like a wee toddy for your flu ? You deserve one.
For those who don't know what toddy is, here's an explanation.

A drink, a mixture of whiskey, boiling water, honey or sugar and cloves.



but note 'The word is a corruption of 'Taudi' the Indian name for the saccharine juice of palm spathes'. (Brewer).

Old Doll.

Why Blend in with the Crowd ? When you were made to stand out !

Re: Cast in cold Iron. Helena Donovan 2009.

WOW!  As I listened... I felt like I was sitting in a lovely little coffee house, drinking perhaps a nice hot toddy!  LOVELY combo to the two of you!

Art and beauty are in the eyes of the beholder.
What constitutes excellent music is in the ears of the listener.

Re: Cast in cold Iron. Helena Donovan 2009.

Thank you Mekidsmom.

I got a phone call about this piece yesterday. They asked for my  permission to publish it in  there monthly
paper. As my kids would say " COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL.

I just know your all delighted for me.

Ps. What about you stransongs ? are ya over the flu yet ?

Slán

Old Doll.

Why Blend in with the Crowd ? When you were made to stand out !

Re: Cast in cold Iron. Helena Donovan 2009.

Hi,

Well done ! Which paper / mag is it ?

As for the flu - I'm just coming out of it - it decided to take up residence in my chest , but refused the rent demands. I sent Aunty Biotic in to sort them out - still no rent though.

"Don't play what's there, play what's not there." Miles Davis

Re: Cast in cold Iron. Helena Donovan 2009.

Good for you Lena, your writings should be seen by all.

Congratulations big_smile

Kenny

Just Keepin on Keepin on
Martin DC15E
Cort MR710F
Squire Strat (Chinese)

Re: Cast in cold Iron. Helena Donovan 2009.

Hi Stransongs,

Im sorry i forgot to get back to this question. Its The monthly herald distributed by
the Hospice around the country. I have had some pieces published over the years,
its always a good feeling to see it printed elsewhere.

I Hope the  [swine] has left its non paying abode ?:lol:

Old Doll.

Why Blend in with the Crowd ? When you were made to stand out !

Re: Cast in cold Iron. Helena Donovan 2009.

you have such a rhythmical way with words, you can make reading about such mundane things as a park bench interesting and lyrical. you have such a way with words.

as i read i found my-self picturing the bench, with brown autumnal leaves swirling about and landing on the grass, a tree in the distance and behind that a cove with white horses racing to the deserted beach.

so not just a poem? a story of the mind.

dda iawn

phill

Ask not what Chordie can do for you, but what you can do for Chordie.

Re: Cast in cold Iron. Helena Donovan 2009.

Congrats indeed!  That is fantastic!  I've never submitted anything to anywhere to have a chance at something being published, so I can only guess at your joy.  Very cooool

Art and beauty are in the eyes of the beholder.
What constitutes excellent music is in the ears of the listener.