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An original acoustic solo song, please comment because this is my first "real" piece of music I wrote and recorded and I'd like to come up with more.
Hi Steven ,I liked the first part,got me a bit when you went into the strumming,found it to much of a contrast,overall thought it was good,nice sounding guitar.
Trevor
Nice work on this piece Stephen. 
You don't need to hear how good your piece is to come up with more like it.
You got the music in you.
Well Done Sir
KAP
Hi Steven ,I liked the first part,got me a bit when you went into the strumming,found it to much of a contrast,overall thought it was good,nice sounding guitar.
Trevor
Thanks, I was a little apprenhensive about including the strumming/tapping part in there, but I wanted to have a sort of break in between the melodies.
Nice work on this piece Stephen.
You don't need to hear how good your piece is to come up with more like it.You got the music in you.
Well Done Sir
KAP
Thanks much, I just want some feedback from more experienced players so I can improve on the next one.
Stephen this is a very good arrangement. Couldn't decide if it reminds me of Eric Johnson or the CSNY song "Find the Cost of Freedom". The latter moreso because it is short and complex. I recommend you find a way to layer some lyrics after listening to the CSNY one to see what I mean. That one in just about 2 minutes is so powerful. I hope you'll take that as a big compliment as intended.
Steve
Stephen this is a very good arrangement. Couldn't decide if it reminds me of Eric Johnson or the CSNY song "Find the Cost of Freedom". The latter moreso because it is short and complex. I recommend you find a way to layer some lyrics after listening to the CSNY one to see what I mean. That one in just about 2 minutes is so powerful. I hope you'll take that as a big compliment as intended.
Steve
Thanks much, I'll have to take a listen to the second one.
hi stephen listened to all your music,you've developed a lovely sound and i don't think you need to change anything just keep doing what you're doing,well done....stay cool
AccoustikNoyz wrote:Stephen this is a very good arrangement. Couldn't decide if it reminds me of Eric Johnson or the CSNY song "Find the Cost of Freedom". The latter moreso because it is short and complex. I recommend you find a way to layer some lyrics after listening to the CSNY one to see what I mean. That one in just about 2 minutes is so powerful. I hope you'll take that as a big compliment as intended.
Steve
Thanks much, I'll have to take a listen to the second one.
I did listen to the CSNY song, loved it. I don't think I'll be adding lyrics to this one, maybe on a future project though.
I think it's great but the little strum shredd thing doesn't really fit the song. Nice work though
I love it! It's true that the contrast is a little drastic, but I like the "strum shredd" thing better. almost like the first part doesn't fit as well to with the rest. But really, I love how it is. Contrast can be good.
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