• Registered: 2009-06-13
  • Posts: 3

Topic: Time and now your gone

It hurts to see how time kills
I wish you that you where here by my side
My friends say he's a joke
But in my world he has my heart


He held me tight when I felt like crying
He beat up the guy that flirted with me in the hall
I was down and about to fall he came behind and grabbed my hand
I miss him

I want to fell his hand on my face
the warmth from your hug
I wish i could go back to when we parted
And fix what went wrong
but your gone now and i miss the colonge on my pillow
i miss your lips on mine


but time went by and you left me hear
I am picking my up peices of whats left of me
You were mine at once but now you are gone

This world is so cold & deceiving but i keep my head up like my nose is bleeding..
Lil Wayne
  • From: The Land Of Song
  • Registered: 2007-12-10
  • Posts: 5,707

Re: Time and now your gone

hello again elizabet,

i'm reading your work top down, which means your last posting first! another profound piece of work, myself; i've never understood women who are enamoured by men who use violence to put their point across...different strokes...

this is a fuller story than "just read this" but it could well be a continuation of it.

you have a very strong style and tackle the love problem straight on. one thing though, a little bit of background would be nice. this is just a personal thing as i like to know what your mind set was at the time of writing, and if it's a work of fiction or did happen.

hope it all works out for you with this guy

phill

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