1 Topic by Elizabet1100 (edited by Elizabet1100 2009-06-13 19:45:17)

  • Registered: 2009-06-13
  • Posts: 3

Topic: just read it

he knows he is wrong it was his fault
Now were fighting truth i love him
And he loves me this world is strange

I feel pain for the words unsaid
He is saying things to me they make me feel like a little kid


Please help me i need comments

This world is so cold & deceiving but i keep my head up like my nose is bleeding..
Lil Wayne
  • From: The Land Of Song
  • Registered: 2007-12-10
  • Posts: 5,704

Re: just read it

hi Elizabet1100,

i just read it...

to be honest, it's difficult to comment on a subject you have no background for. it's short and sweet, and i'm guessing full of vitriol, but it's like walking in half way through you telling your friend that your other half is getting you down cos he's not pulling his weight, or he's blaming you for something he's done? in which case it gets to the point and is clear about the subject.

i've noticed a lot of people [me included big_smile] are using this site to get things off their chest, in rhyme.

any way nice work, and welcome to chordie poems, i'm looking forward to seeing more of your work.

phill

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