• Tine
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Topic: One in a million

I have this truely wonderful friend who inspired me to write this.


One in a million.

I met him many years before,
His friendly smile is an open door…
Instinctively I knew I’d like him then.
And we have been acquaintances,
He’s giving and so free to please
An exception of the rule when it comes to men.

So lately things they have been bleak…   
The first time I had felt so weak,
Not knowing which way I should  turn.
People disrespected me,
Left me broken on my knees,
Enjoying every chance to watch me squirm.

But here he is, my loving friend,
With his massive giving heart he mends,
Each part of me that feels it can’t go on.
I’ve never had this with a man,
A companion who understands,
Just what I have needed for so long.

Though he can’t take my fears away,
He sends me sunshine everyday,
And makes me feel that life is worth the risk.
Supportive and approachable,
There’s nothing I can’t broach him on,
I will be ever grateful for this.

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Re: One in a million

Hi Tine,

Dare I say your a lucky person to have such a good friend?

I must commend you on your use of words and how honestly they come across.

Having read some of your other stuff, I know that you've been through one hell of a traumatic experience, for which all I can do is offer you my sympathy, but on the up side, and I don't mean to make small of it, you've got some great material out of it!

So another great piece of work, you do seem to be getting stronger all the time, so keep going, your masterpiece is just around the corner, [that's what I keep telling my-self, anyway].

Good luck and congratulations for having such a wonderful friend, and being able to talk about him and your situation so fluently.

Phill

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