Topic: empty dreams ( by: rocker101)

i know im not gonna win a spelling b, but still tell me what u think of this one.


(verse 1)

i was watchen the tube

and i was thinking of you

and as i fade off to sleep

you still run thru my mind


(pre chorus)

now im sleepin and im dreamin

and im dreaming of you


(chorus)

and we're walkin and were singing

and we're singing and we're singing a song

it was a song that i had writen for u

and as were singin i was thinken

ill never be with you


(verse 2)

three a.m and i wake up

and i look at the spot were you used to lay

but the sheets are so cold

cold like a sunday in mid december

now im pourin a drink

and i start to think

but as im thinking i drift away

and then i start dreamin

and im dreamin of you


(chorus)


(verse 3)

now its moring my heads punding

probly from the consuption

from the night before

and now im starrin really wondering

why the sheets are still cold

then i remember that i was only dreamin

and the only time that im with you

is in my sleep

so i poor another and another till ive had enuf

then its back to sleepin for you and

then i start dreamin

and im dreamin of you


(chorus) 2x

Re: empty dreams ( by: rocker101)

Hey rocker101 - Like the idea here, but can't decide whether it is country twanger or a frenzied punk ballad or something else entirely.  What kind of backing do you envision for your lyric?  James

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Re: empty dreams ( by: rocker101)

well i know it's not a county song, but i just wrote this one and me and the band haven't started working on it yet so when i know more about it after we start i'll get back to u on it

                                peace'

                                   jesse