Topic: as u look at him

i got another one for u ppl that read this. this one is from the heart i know because i wrote it the night she pretty much killed me (figure of speech) but dont worry about it now im dating her best freind so ROCK ON!!tell me what u think.


(verse one)

i used to call u,

i used to talk to u

now all the memerys,

just fade away,

as im looking at u,

as u look at him


(verse two)

we used to be so close,

thought it would never end

then u hurt me deep inside,

when u left me for him,

now all the pain comes running back

as im looking at u.

as u look at him


(verse 3)

now all my thoughts,

keep me wondering

when i walk by u,

and stair him down

if u ever think of me,

as im looking at u,

as u look at him.


i got some bad a** tabs to it to so if u want to check em out write me back tell me what u think taker easy bye.

Re: as u look at him

rocker101 - nifty little ditty there, but looking at this one and your 'mrs. heartake' lyric I'm wondering if you subconsciously pick girls who are bound to hurt your pride.  I guess that is one way to get song ideas, but it must be absolutely exhausting.


Her best friend?  Girls (and people) like that don't have friends - they have co-conspirators and partners in predatory dating.  I see another heartbreak song in the making . . .

"That darn Pythagorean Comma thing keeps messing me up!"
[url]http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pythagorean_comma[/url]

Re: as u look at him

thanks for the awsome reply. yeah this ones definetly going better but u might be right if her freinds like she is you'll have another one to read! lol,  taker easy man peace.


       p.s ill post one of my more upbeat songs 4 u so u can get more of an idea of my music

Re: as u look at him

i posted another