Topic: Past the clouds

Here is my most recent work. be gentle with your remarks, I'm fragile. lol

Past the clouds, to the blue skies above
Reminiscing on our life and our love
You weren't there, to see me pass
Only wish on more time I could hold your hand

And I wonder, do you think of me now that I'm gone
Or am I a memory that somehow did not live on

Sunny days are few and far between
Now I see you, but only in my dreams
You're smiling, you're laughing, you're loving me
You're smiling, you're laughing, you're loving me

Still I wonder do you think of me now that I'm gone
Or am I a memory that somehow did not live on

I never too the time to show what you mean to me
I hope now you understand, I hope that you see
As I ascend into the blue skies above
I hop you got a glimpse of my love

And I wonder, do you think of menow that I'm gone
Or am I a memory that somehow did not live on
Still I wonder, do you think of me now that I'm gone
Or am I a memory that somehow did not live on



B.W 2008

Re: Past the clouds

Hi buddrow smile Welcome to Chordie.
Very interesting lyrics for your first post.I would like to see the chords and possibly/maybe a recording of your song so we could hear it as you intended.

Thanks Kenny

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Re: Past the clouds

Hi Buddrow and welcome to Chordie,

I do like your work that you have shown us, obviously it is not finished yet and I will be pleased to see the finished song.

Roger

"Do, or do not; there is no try"

Re: Past the clouds

Thanks for the incouraging replies. I'll be posting the chords to this song as well as a few other song of mine for review. Have a good day.

Bud

Re: Past the clouds

Oh! I love this piece.

Cant wait to hear the melody,

Well done,

Old Doll.

Why Blend in with the Crowd ? When you were made to stand out !

Re: Past the clouds

hi buddrow

you obviously have been writing for some time, if not and this is your first attempt then very well done, even if you have many others you can be proud of this, it's very lyrical and tasteful, i get the feeling it's about ascending to heaven? now that's different

phill

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Re: Past the clouds

Thank you all for your ind remarks. I'm not necessarily an avid writer, but I have my moments of inspiration.  big_smile