• From: QLD
  • Registered: 2007-03-04
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Topic: .::.NeW sOnG.::. Goodbye

This song is for my friend <3 Leighette <3 who is the strongest person i know smile she gives me hope love {The Works}
I need to make up some chords for this yet, i have a tune in mind big_smile xxx



Goodbye

VERSE 1
There’s no place
In this world
That will make me change my mind about our love
Because it hurts
Whenever I look in your eyes
To find that you don’t love me
Instead you love her

CHORUS
Is it about time I moved on?
And forget about you
Is it about time I let go?
I’m running out of things to do
I need some security
I need this loving feeling
Are you going to say
Good bye

VERSE 2
There’s no help
For love
You have to find it on your own
There is No one
That makes me feel
The way you make me
Why did you just go?

CHORUS 2
Is it about time I hated you?
And left this country
Is it about time I looked up?
To the sun?
I need you there
To help me dear
Oh why did you say
Goodbye

BRIDGE

You must be in love
You must be so happy
While I am here broken hearted
Do you feel proud
For what you did
To me

CHORUS 2

Follow your heart
It usually makes the right decisions <3
  • From: A black hole in deep space
  • Registered: 2007-10-28
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Re: .::.NeW sOnG.::. Goodbye

hinder read the "sticky" on this forum it may help you, and by the way you have to include chords with your lyrics or its considered a poem and the powers that be on chordie frown on this smile

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  • From: derbyshire
  • Registered: 2007-05-17
  • Posts: 2,844

Re: .::.NeW sOnG.::. Goodbye

hi rhiannon lyrics look good ,so lets have the music then we can all have a bash,well done....stay cool

love is life ,life is for love,keep a true heart and live life to the full....stay cool

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  • From: Almancil, Algarve, Portugal
  • Registered: 2006-09-02
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Re: .::.NeW sOnG.::. Goodbye

Hi Rhiannon,

I like the lyrics you have written but as you know 'a song ain't a song until it has music' so I am impatienly waiting until you have converted the melody you have into chords. Perhaps when you do you will honour us with a recording of it too smile.

Grandpappy Roger

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