1 Topic by iitzLObabyOX (edited by iitzLObabyOX 2008-10-31 13:46:25)

  • Registered: 2008-10-31
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Topic: ::NEW SONG:: His Song

{t:His Song}         
{st:Pop/country tune}               
{c:up-beat, in 4/4 time} 

I just wrote this song recently and i think the lyrics can relate to A LOT of people :]

CHORDS:: [D] [EM] [G] [A] Repeatedly.
Rumor has it that someone's got a crush on you,
oh but do you know who.
maybe she's closer than you think,
like down the street. do do do do do dooo.
she gets caught looking at you,
walk down the hall.
she smiles and turns away,
but doesn't see the smile on your face....

CHORUS [D] [EM] [G] [A] Repeatedly.
its love like in the movies where the two don't know what love really is,
until they find the one looking, looking in their eyes rather than their feet.
but there's a little secret, for this all american boy.
its me.

[D] [EM] [G] [A] Repeatedly.
you walk into class, im trying not to look, as obvious,
that i was writing your last name with my first.
you stop at my desk, take my hand and this is what you saaaaiiiiiiiddddd.

CHORUS  [D] [EM] [G] [A] Repeatedly.
i feel like im in a movie and i dont know what love is but i know...
i love when you look at me, and every time you smile, it gets me,
oh baby i can see, so kiss me.

BRIDGE  [EM] [A] repeatedly
every time i see you smile,
i get this feeling inside of me,
just look and see.

CHORUS  [D] [EM] [G] [A] Repeatedly.
i feel like im in a movie and i don't know what love is but i know...
i love when you look at me, and every time you smile, it gets me eyah eyah, eOHHH

~instrumental~   [D] [EM] [G] [A] Repeatedly.

[D] [EM] [G] [A] Repeatedly.
oh oo oh oo oh oo oh oo ooh movies
oh that ah ah ah all american boy.

OUT-RO:  [D] [EM] [G] [A] Repeatedly.
rumor has it that someones got a crush on you,
oh but do you know who...


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  • From: A black hole in deep space
  • Registered: 2007-10-28
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Re: ::NEW SONG:: His Song

you came close with the chopro you have to use [ ] brakets and put song between them this starts the chopro its the "start" button and at the end of the song put [/song] this has to be in there there are no spaces between the [ song ] like this just pretend these are the [ ] brakets so its |song| to start only there [---] like this I like the song by the way smile

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  • From: derbyshire
  • Registered: 2007-05-17
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Re: ::NEW SONG:: His Song

hi iitzlobabyox welcome to chordie i've read through your song and it looks quite good,once you get the chopro and the chords placed into each line you'll be doing the buisness then ,well done....stay cool

love is life ,life is for love,keep a true heart and live life to the full....stay cool

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  • From: Almancil, Algarve, Portugal
  • Registered: 2006-09-02
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Re: ::NEW SONG:: His Song

Hi iitsLObabyOX and welcome to Chordie,

It is always a little difficult to comment on a song without the chords being in place or a recording to hear it but this is my impression, for what is is worth.

The lyrics are fine and I like the story they tell but I did have difficulty in playing it without the chords in the right position as I kept getting the syncronisation of words and chords wrong. Personally I would have liked to have seen more chord variation as I found it a little repetitous when I played it but, without hearing the melody you have put to it, that may just have been me and my interpretation. We shall have to persuade to you to record your song so that we can get a true picture of it.

That being said it is a fine first offering to the Forum and I look forward to hearing more from you. Well done and thank you.

Roger

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