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Topic: t:title"a dream girl"

a dream girl by robert bonsall
                             11/9/08{fiction}

1/[c]diamonds sparkle,like the[f] twinkle in your[c] eye,
ruby is the colour of the[g] lipstick you wear,
[c]emerald is the colour[f] of your ey-es,
and[c] gold is the[g] colour of your long blonde[c] hair.

chorus
[f]how can i tell you what you[c] mean to me,                           
you're [f]one of a kind,i'm [g]out of your league,
can[c] only admire you[f] from a-[c]far,
hoping you'll look my[g] way once in a [c]while.

2/[c]all these things,is what[f] makes you,[c]you,
your beauty,you radience when i[g] look at you,
every[c] head tu-rns,as you[f] walk on[c] b-y,                     
you're gods gift to men,you ca[g]hear them [c]sigh.

chorus
[f]how can i tell you what you[c] mean to me,
you're[f] one of a kind,i'm[g] out of your league,
can[c] only admire you[f] from a-[c]far,
hoping you'll look my[g] way once in a[c] while.

3[c]/till you find the right man,to [f]sweep you off your [c]feet,
your happy with friends,and[g] new ones you meet,
having[c] fun,cause lifes[f] too [c]short,
working hard,just[g] yourself to [c]support.

chorus
[f]how can i tell you what you[c] mean to me,
you're[f] one of a kind,i'm[g] out of your league,
can[c] only admire you[f] from a-[c]far,
hoping you'll look my[g] way once in a[c] while.

love is life ,life is for love,keep a true heart and live life to the full....stay cool

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Re: t:title"a dream girl"

hi daddy,

we've all felt this way about someone. that person is too good for me, she wont look twice at me, that type of thing.
i've always had the impression that my wife is too good for me, which is why a lot of my songs indicate my fear of her leaving or chucking me out, well i must be doing something right, 28 years next year! enough about me, see this is what a good song does, it makes you think...and this song has made me think...well done

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Re: t:title"a dream girl"

Nice writing again Daddy smile
Insecure moments I think can be a good thing as it helps to keep one in check with reality.

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Re: t:title"a dream girl"

Hi Daddycool,

I think that this is one of the best you have written and I will play it again in a minute. Well done.

I notice you have made a point of marking it as fiction. Is that because Mummycool would be Mummymad if she though you had your eye on another lol


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Re: t:title"a dream girl"

hi phill, ken,roger it pays to keep stock of what you've got and how it would affect you if it was'nt there,money has always been the thorn in our relationship,or the lack of it ,dose'nt matter how hard you work there is never enough of it ,thats life....stay cool

love is life ,life is for love,keep a true heart and live life to the full....stay cool

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