• From: Chattanooga, TN, USA
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Topic: just added first youtube videos of original songs

check 'em out at http://youtube.com/user/ZenButcher13

I wrote "Whiskey" about a family member that would have a shot of whiskey at night before bed to relieve pain from arthritis.  The lyrics are:

     Bring me my whiskey; send me to bed; pray that I hurt no more.
     I know you'll miss me; and it's hard to let go; but I'll meet you again inside Heaven's door.

There is also a little "instrumental" version of "Whiskey" here I was just playing around on my son's electric guitar doing lead over the rhythm guitar part.  I think it turned out quite beautiful and "Slash-esque", if I do say so myself.

Lastly, there is a song I wrote called, "One More Time" about a personal relationship where I felt things changing because I had made some mistakes.  (No, LOL, it isn't about me cheating on a girlfriend!)

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Re: just added first youtube videos of original songs

Nicely done Zenbutcher smile
Do you have full version of Whiskey?
Also I didn't see "One More Time" to have a listen.
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Re: just added first youtube videos of original songs

Wow thats really good man... are there more verses?? Loved the instrumental too, you oughta try to find some equipment and dub that electric work over the acoustic track...
Loved it,
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Re: just added first youtube videos of original songs

Quite nice, zenbutcher!

I would also like to hear more verses - there are many places you can go from a great start like that.  Don't limit yourself to continuing the song just about that particular family member - different verses can be about different people or even different perspectives on the same theme.  James

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  • From: Chattanooga, TN, USA
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Re: just added first youtube videos of original songs

Thanks for the input.  That's all I have on that song right now.   I hope to finish it one day when the inspiration hits.

KAP - you're right, I though I had uploaded that, but I guess not.  So.... I just did.  Check it out!

  • From: Chattanooga, TN, USA
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Re: just added first youtube videos of original songs

btw - I just listened to it and I have a terrible tendency of changing the pronunciation of words when I sing - don't know why.  So, anyway, if you can't understand, then here are the lyrics:

     One more time; let me hold you one more time.
     And one more day; let me love you one more day.

     I never claimed to be a good man
     And I never said that I could change...

     repeat first verse (because it's all I have written so far, LOL)

attaboys or you-shoulda's are welcome!

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Re: just added first youtube videos of original songs

Attaboy....One More Time is ace....and thankfully not a Britney Spears cover!!

Well done!

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Attaboy...But you gotta finish them. smile

Good work,I could here the lyrics just fine.They both have the makings of good songs.
Find some time and get er done son smile

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Re: just added first youtube videos of original songs

I enjoyed all,

I would love to hear them all again on completion.

Very well done,Zenbutcher.

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Re: just added first youtube videos of original songs

Thanks for the encouragement!  I will post as soon as they are done.

Are any of you on youtube or myspace or anything where I could hear your music?

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Re: just added first youtube videos of original songs

Hi Zen,

Nice work and I look forward to hearing more from you.

Many of the Chordie Members have MySpace and YouTube sites. If you click on the Website under my name it will take you to Friends of Chordie the MySpace I run exclusively for Chordie Members and if you look at the friends list you can click on the Members picture and it will redirect you to their MySpace.

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