Topic: "Forever Clear"

Need ideas on how to 'finish' this ditty . . . somehow, it just doesn't feel 'done' yet but I can't seem to find the direction for a last verse or two. Help please -

Forever ClearJames McCormick 1/13/2007


In 3/4 time, An Existential Waltz


A-[C]lone in a [Em]field I [Dm]ponder my [G]place


[G7]Oh [C]reasons for [Am]being hor-[Dm]izons and [G]space


[G7]The [F]starlight and [G]crickets [F]helped me per-[G]ceive


Ad-[F]ventures I've [G]been [F]blessed to re-[G]ceive


The [C]harsh light of [F]day [C]shows what is [G]near


But [C]darkness [F]makes [G]forever [C]clear . . . [G] . . .


A-[C]lone I [Em]stood on the [Dm]edge of the [G]sky


[G7] . . . . [C]Awestruck [Am]dizzy [Dm]tears in my [G]eye


[G7]Each [F]breath [G]lightning [F]dazzle my [G]soul


[F]Heartbeat [G]thunder [F]in me ex-[G]plodes


The [C]harsh light of [F]day [C]shows what is [G]near


But [C]darkness [F]makes [G]forever [C]clear . . . . [G] . . .


I [C]don't know ex-[Em]actly how [Dm]long I was [G]there



[G7]It [C]may have been [Am]seconds an [Dm]hour a [G]year


[G7]Sere-[F]naded by [G]crickets a-[F]wash in star-[G]light


A-[F]live in the [G]moment [F]one with the [G]night


The [C]harsh light of [F]day [C]shows what is [G]near


But [C]darkness [F]makes [G]forever [C]clear . . . . [G] . . .


The [C]soil my [Em]bones the [Dm]stars the [G]rain


[G7]Es-[C]sential in-[Am]gredients [Dm]all just the [G]same


[G7]From [F]cosmic col-[G]lisions [F]entropy [G]rust


Just [F]ashes to [G]ashes and [F]dust into [G]dust


The [C]harsh light of [F]day [C]shows what is [G]near


But [C]darkness [F]makes [G]forever [C]clear.





"That darn Pythagorean Comma thing keeps messing me up!"
[url]http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pythagorean_comma[/url]

Re: "Forever Clear"

hi james how did we miss this one,a dandy song well done...stay cool

love is life ,life is for love,keep a true heart and live life to the full....stay cool

Re: "Forever Clear"

I agree Daddy cool.

If words were food, id have had the best feast here in the music section.

Beautiful songs so descriptive.  A moment ago i was feeling sad
because of a Broken Doll. Now im being serenaded by crickets in starlight.

Where would you get it for free i ask ?

Lovely stuff James!

Old Doll.

Why Blend in with the Crowd ? When you were made to stand out !

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Wow, what beautiful lyrics. !!!!!!!!

Haven't been on here for a long while, must try and catch up!

X

aka ......   Boxer Petal....<3

Re: "Forever Clear"

Nice job James...You ole lyricist you.

KAP54

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Re: "Forever Clear"

Whoa, Nelly!
Another one from January of 2007 . . . and yet another one I keep meaning to record.
This a rare serious one from me - no goofing or spoofing, just sincerity and sweetness.

Again, thanks for pulling this one out of the archives - I shall finally record this one very soon.
James

"That darn Pythagorean Comma thing keeps messing me up!"
[url]http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pythagorean_comma[/url]