1 Topic by stealstrings (edited by stealstrings 2011-10-31 05:30:47)

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Topic: HUman Race

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Who is more foolish, the boy afraid of the dark...or the man afraid of the light?
  • From: British Columbia
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Re: HUman Race

first try...

Who is more foolish, the boy afraid of the dark...or the man afraid of the light?
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Re: HUman Race

hi again could do with a few more verses but well written ,.....stay cool

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Re: HUman Race

Hi Stealstrings,

Is this about unrequited love ?.  Id like to know what was the thinking behind these lyrics.
Just Old Doll being nosey!

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Re: HUman Race

thanks again...i try to keep em simple...but i do agree- its definately missing something

Who is more foolish, the boy afraid of the dark...or the man afraid of the light?
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Re: HUman Race

Hi stealstrings,
welcome to chordie! nice song, just needs extended, maybe add a chorus. totally just my opinion
though. Bob Dylan's "Maggie's Farm" does not have a chorus. Still fun to play though!
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  • From: British Columbia
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Re: HUman Race

just edited this plays a lot smoother now, thanks for the tips

Who is more foolish, the boy afraid of the dark...or the man afraid of the light?
  • From: Chilliwack, BC
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Re: HUman Race

nice tune on the chorus   :-)

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Re: HUman Race

I like it.

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Re: HUman Race

This song almost sounds like someone is turning into a zombie or a vampire.

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Re: HUman Race

Nice chord progession and it flows well. I enjoyed playing and singing it but as usual I would like to hear a recording of how you meant the song to sound.

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