1 Topic by fightclub09 (edited by fightclub09 2008-04-29 18:55:43)

  • From: CO
  • Registered: 2008-03-15
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Topic: Thunder is the night

A song i wrote and will play at unplugged for Nattalie




Everything's changing and i wont stop complaining until your by my side.

hopeless dreams
are thrown out the window
like everything you thought you knew before.

Hopeless dreams are torn into pieces
like everything youd wished for.

I know you love me
I swear its true.
I know you love me
like you used to
And when were alone
I know youll swear it too.

The sun falls over your eyes it shines like a thousand broken skies.....


hopeless dreams
are thrown out the window
like everything you thought you knew before.

Everythings changing and i wont stop complaining until your by my side.

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  • Registered: 2007-04-03
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Re: Thunder is the night

Good lyrics here,

Any idea for melody?


Old Doll.

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  • From: derbyshire
  • Registered: 2007-05-17
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Re: Thunder is the night

hi devin nice lyrics,i'd try a,d,em
[a]everythings changing and[d]i won't stop conplaining,[em]till you are by my[a]side,get my drift....stay cool

love is life ,life is for love,keep a true heart and live life to the full....stay cool

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  • From: East Anglia, England
  • Registered: 2007-06-19
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Re: Thunder is the night

hey fightclub09,
really good lyrics, very well thought through. keep working on it.
i guessed how it would go, and can imagine it sort of picked or with arpreggiated chords (hehehe love that word, makes me sound all clever).

well doen, and i'm sure Nattalie will love it. smile

keep shredding! cool

don't ever stand aside, don't ever be denied
you gotta be who you be if you're comin' with me
cool
okay??

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  • From: CO
  • Registered: 2008-03-15
  • Posts: 10

Re: Thunder is the night

daddycool wrote:

hi devin nice lyrics,i'd try a,d,em
[a]everythings changing and[d]i won't stop conplaining,[em]till you are by my[a]side,get my drift....stay cool

That sounds good!

sorry i didnt post more. i kind of had to go....Its

[dm11] Everythings changing and i wont stop [asus] complaining until your by my [gm] side

[dm11] hopeless dreams...

it pretty much follows that chord pattern.

NEW: [dm11] the sun falls over your eyes it [asus] shines like a [dm11] thousand bleeding [gm] skies....

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