1 2008-04-02 03:08:55 (edited by Russell_Harding 2008-04-02 05:02:50)
Re: THE CHURCH ACROSS THE WAY
hi russel,
i felt so sad reading this, as a song it flows so smoothly, the rhythm is perfect, but the sadness you project in the words [i havent heard it yet] just slaps you in the face.
got to say i like a drink or two, but i cant hold it very well, but i'm gonna try again tonight!
i get the feeling that you feel guilty for being in the bar? looking over at the church and the little children looking back at you? if this is just out of your imagination then you are truly worthy of the title champion wordsmith, even if it's relating a true event it's still top drawer...your the man
my respect
phill
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Watlz Russell!
Yes! i love an ole waltz. The songs are usually sad or love stories.
Your song is a wee bit of both , Love of a Woman. Love of Drink.
The latter usually pays the price!!. Good song, well recorded as always.
Old Doll.
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phil this song is a little of both but mostly i had a mental picture of a guy sitting in a bar on a sunday morning too lonely to be alone after splitting up with his woman its 95% imagination thanks for you comments russ
hi russel,
i felt so sad reading this, as a song it flows so smoothly, the rhythm is perfect, but the sadness you project in the words [i havent heard it yet] just slaps you in the face.
got to say i like a drink or two, but i cant hold it very well, but i'm gonna try again tonight!
i get the feeling that you feel guilty for being in the bar? looking over at the church and the little children looking back at you? if this is just out of your imagination then you are truly worthy of the title champion wordsmith, even if it's relating a true event it's still top drawer...your the man
my respect
phill
5 2008-04-02 11:39:37 (edited by Russell_Harding 2008-04-02 11:40:45)
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helena the love of a woman is as dangerious as the love of drink they both can do you in the song reflects a few sunday mornings i spent and the uneasyness of having to feel ashamed of looking at children and there parents as i was getting sh##faced glad you enjoyed listining my lady
Watlz Russell!
Yes! i love an ole waltz. The songs are usually sad or love stories.
Your song is a wee bit of both , Love of a Woman. Love of Drink.
The latter usually pays the price!!. Good song, well recorded as always.
Old Doll.
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Russ
That's another great country and western feel ballard your've brought back to life there.
Bravo my friend.
Ark
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thanks a lot ark ive been writting country songs this last week or at least digging them out of thr archives of my closet i must have a hundred or more that have been collecting dust so to speak and its kind of like rummaging through your thoughts a flea circus of undeveloped themes but im never to busy for other projects so......
Russ
That's another great country and western feel ballard your've brought back to life there.
Bravo my friend.
Ark
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a very good tune, simple and effective
i felt a lot of symmpathy for the guy in the song, too.
another great song, i'm in awe (whatever that means), keep it up!
you gotta be who you be if you're comin' with me
okay??
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will your comments are always welcome thankyou or do you prefer liam? either way i appreciate your thoughts russ
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hi russell a lovely song,sounded great too,well done...stay cool
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thankyou i love r&r but theres a warm spot in my heart for country songs they have a way of tugging at the emotions with simple words and melodies
hi russell a lovely song,sounded great too,well done...stay cool