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Topic: RE; SHATTERED DREAMS

A dark number with a simple slow to medium down up strum.

Shattered dreamsby;Brad McDougall


march 27/07




[Am]Here in the valley of [Dm] dark and of [Am] light.




[Am]A man can live peaceful [C] without any [Am] fight.


[Am]He will get lonley in [Dm] parts of his [Am] life.


[Am]He needs a companion [C] so he takes a [Am] wife.


Oh these [C] dreams, stay with [G7] me,


Oh these [Am] dreams, set me [F] free.


[Am]They start a new life,they [Dm] live off the [Am] land.


[Am]They have a small farm,do the [C] best that they [Am] can.


[Am]She has a few children, [Dm] He works day and [Am] night.


[Am]The goverment drafts him, [C] he has to go [Am] fight.


Oh these [C] dreams, stay with [G7] me


Oh these [Am] dreams, set me [F] free....



[Am]He's off to the war now,[Dm] the battle [Am] begins,


[Am]He thinks of his family,[C] and how he can [Am] win,


[Am]He's got to be strong now,[Dm] he's got to be [Am] brave,


[Am]He stands up one time,[C] a bullet finds [Am] him.


Shattered [C] dreams, go [G7] away....


Shattered [C] dreams, leave [F] today.....


[Am]She waits in the parlour,[Dm] the farm is no [Am] more,


[Am]She still can't believe, he's [C] not comming [Am] home,


[Am]Her kids are grown up now,[Dm] and all moved [Am] away,


[Am]She just can't make it [C] thru another [Am] day..


Shattered [C] dreams, go [G7] away,


Shattered [C] dreams, leave [F] today.


Scattered[C] dreams...........[let C ring]


   the end.






...Badeye.

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Re: RE; SHATTERED DREAMS

Great job badeye. Looks like your getting the hang of making your songs look all 'purdy'. Very realistic story, well told.

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Re: RE; SHATTERED DREAMS

Good Song Badeye,

A lady i know through the Womens Movement, lost her young husband in the Congo War. In the mid sixties.

She never did quite get over it. Also never remarried. War is such a useless waste of life.

Well done.

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Re: RE; SHATTERED DREAMS

hey badeye,
very emotional song, well written smile
good topic, too, i understand it very well. you have very interesting ideas for songs, things people would care about, and the chords are really fitting

well done

don't ever stand aside, don't ever be denied
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Re: RE; SHATTERED DREAMS

Hi Badeye,

Nice moody song, well done. When are we likely to hear a recording of this one please?

Roger

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Thank for your comments Southpaw,Old Doll, Liam,and Roger, I do have my diploma from the "Roger Guppy song
Posting Acedemy" and it sure comes in handy, Thanks Roger.

hope you all have a great day...Badeye.

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Badeye ,
   Excellent work , I'm rather fond of dark stuff myself , I think it reveals a lot about the writer's life experiences .
  Expert use of minors and sevens too .
   I do a lot of " dark " stuff ,
that I have written over the years . I have found that with the right chords , just the intro will set the mood .
   Sometimes at jams I will start right out with three dark ones in a row , then lighten things up with some good loud classic rock , then
have someone ask me to do some more of the other ......
   Again , excellent work !!!

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Re: RE; SHATTERED DREAMS

such a sad song badeye, flows very well and the rhyme is excellent. i love story songs and this gives the background then the hook at the end. bet it sounds different to the way i played it!

great stuff

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Thank you, very encouraging.

...Badeye..

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Re: RE; SHATTERED DREAMS

badeye wrote:

A dark number with a simple slow to medium down up strum.

Shattered dreamsby;Brad McDougall


march 27/07




[Am]Here in the valley of [Dm] dark and of [Am] light.




[Am]A man can live peaceful [C] without any [Am] fight.


[Am]He will get lonley in [Dm] parts of his [Am] life.


[Am]He needs a companion [C] so he takes a [Am] wife.


Oh these [C] dreams, stay with [G7] me,


Oh these [Am] dreams, set me [F] free.


[Am]They start a new life,they [Dm] live off the [Am] land.


[Am]They have a small farm,do the [C] best that they [Am] can.


[Am]She has a few children, [Dm] He works day and [Am] night.


[Am]The goverment drafts him, [C] he has to go [Am] fight.


Oh these [C] dreams, stay with [G7] me


Oh these [Am] dreams, set me [F] free....



[Am]He's off to the war now,[Dm] the battle [Am] begins,


[Am]He thinks of his family,[C] and how he can [Am] win,


[Am]He's got to be strong now,[Dm] he's got to be [Am] brave,


[Am]He stands up one time,[C] a bullet finds [Am] him.


Shattered [C] dreams, go [G7] away....


Shattered [C] dreams, leave [F] today.....


[Am]She waits in the parlour,[Dm] the farm is no [Am] more,


[Am]She still can't believe, he's [C] not comming [Am] home,


[Am]Her kids are grown up now,[Dm] and all moved [Am] away,


[Am]She just can't make it [C] thru another [Am] day..


Shattered [C] dreams, go [G7] away,


Shattered [C] dreams, leave [F] today.


Scattered[C] dreams...........[let C ring]


   the end.






...Badeye.

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Re: RE; SHATTERED DREAMS

Hi Badeye,

Thanks for bringing this back up. smile
This may be a dark, slow number but it tells an all to truthful story.
Right or Wrong...war sucks.

This is an older post....Do you have it recorded?

Nice Write:)

Kenny

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