Topic: Mrs. Heartake (opinion needed please)chouse suggestion open
PLEASE REPLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
im new to song writing but i was wondering what people thought of this piece if i should finish it or not
sorry theres no chourse.
(verse one)
GG Em
mrs heartake is nowere around /GG Em
once again she's probly sleepen around /GG Em
day in and day out i deal with this shit /GG Em
i guess truly i am kinda wiped /GG Em
i cant help it shes one fine bitch /GG Em
(chorse)
(Verse 2)
when im at work all she does is play
shes out all night then she sleeps all day
when were at school ya know she's skippen out
pisses me off makes me wanna shout
but i cant help it shes one fine bitch
(chorse)
(verse 3)
dont ya know its really easy to see
she's in love but its not with me
i should end it but really i can't
i cant help it shes one fine bitch
(chorse)
all verses would have the same chords,im still working out the guitar part so it will probly change. tell me what you think