• From: Sweden
  • Registered: 2008-02-11
  • Posts: 75

Topic: Dead Manision

Intro:     Just make 1 stroke on each chord.

Am                                                            C
Once, i saw an manision far,far away on the horison.

Am                                                        C
It was dead like the bodies in my family cemetery.

Em                                                           Am
So if you make an brave choise, and go in there.

Em
Then You maybe wont see the light again.....

Verse :  count 1  2, 3 4 on each time you shall change chord.

C           D        Em      C
Live for life and die for bravenes

C                  D             Em             C     
Count all the days untill its time for death

       C          Em                  D             C
And then, you might see the light one day.....

Refrain : make as many strokes as possible.

E              Am          E        F
Finish the quest you never began

E             Am           E       F
And be our mighty brave hero....


Now repeat from the verse with some new text i have'nt finished yet.
Then refrain, stick ( not ready either ), refrain, Outro: just rapid on the E-chord till the end....



I did this work on 15 min.
Hope you like it.

  • From: The Land Of Song
  • Registered: 2007-12-10
  • Posts: 5,704

Re: Dead Manision

Hi Slaya,

I seem to be talking to you a lot tonight!

I get the feeling that this maybe heavy rock? I love rock my self, but I try and stay away from the darker side.

Your words are very interesting, and I can see that behind the words you have a more involved story, am I right?

You say that the song is not finished yet, so try and bring out that story line and give us a hint of how you visualise the backing, [pop, country or rock]

Keep Rocking my friend

Phill

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  • From: derbyshire
  • Registered: 2007-05-17
  • Posts: 2,844

Re: Dead Manision

hi slaya welcome to chordie,interesting composition to your song ,i don't particularly like errie places or cemetarys especially at night but a ggod start well done...stay cool

love is life ,life is for love,keep a true heart and live life to the full....stay cool

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  • From: Almancil, Algarve, Portugal
  • Registered: 2006-09-02
  • Posts: 6,205

Re: Dead Manision

Hi slaya,

Welcome to songwriting. A fine start for a song, an unusual theme for one and I like it. I do hope you are going now to spend some more time to finish it as I would like to see the completed song.

Be warned however I will then probably start pestering you to record it so we can see how you  perform it lol.

Well done,

Roger

"Do, or do not; there is no try"

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  • From: Sweden
  • Registered: 2008-02-11
  • Posts: 75

Re: Dead Manision

Well i could do that but the problem is that i dont got any memory on the camera at home.... but when ive got i promise i will make an vid and put on youtobe big_smile
the problem is that im not a good singer sad

  • From: Starkville, Mississippi USA
  • Registered: 2006-03-04
  • Posts: 2,069

Re: Dead Manision

Hi slaya & welcome to the Songwriting forum!

I would also like to hear this when it is finished - video is not necessary, if you have an internal mic on your computer you can download 'Audacity' and make dandy sound recordings.

Please look at the stickie up at the top of the Songwriting section index and see how to post your songs 'all purdy like'.  The formatting voodoo makes them much easier to see and read.
James

"That darn Pythagorean Comma thing keeps messing me up!"
[url]http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pythagorean_comma[/url]

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  • From: Sweden
  • Registered: 2008-02-11
  • Posts: 75

Re: Dead Manision

Srry my sister crashed it for some years ago.
So im making an vid.
Coming so soon as possible.

  • Registered: 2007-04-03
  • Posts: 3,489

Re: Dead Manision

Hi Slaya,

I always try to understand the song lyrics here. Whats the picture/ story here.

Is it about a empty house, with no people or life there?

Or a house of spirits? Ya know "Ghosties? WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!


Old Doll.

Why Blend in with the Crowd ? When you were made to stand out !
  • From: Sweden
  • Registered: 2008-02-11
  • Posts: 75

Re: Dead Manision

well its dead... and dead things kill in my opinion