Topic: Winter Song

I woke up this morning, it was cold damp and windy [and that was just the wife...joke?] so something made me remember this little poem[?] I wrote last year...hope you like it.


Early on a winters morn
And the moon's already gone
There's a crispness in the air
And there's ice upon the pond

At 6 o'clock the day begins
For some it's time to sleep
But far away, away in the east
Dawn light begins to break

A robin starts his chirping
Begins the chorus of the dawn
The post man turns his collar up
To cross the frosty lawn

And the grass beneath his feet will crunch
Like cornflakes in his mouth
He longs to feel the heat that comes
With summers warming month

And now as skies are lightening
And the mill of life returns
And traffic belching carbon fumes
Eyes water, chest burn

But this is how we live today
And for one hundred years
Will crispy winter mornings wake us
As we make our way to work.

Ask not what Chordie can do for you, but what you can do for Chordie.

Re: Winter Song

Beutiful! keep on in that style and add some musik and some melody and you can be 1 of the graetest songwriters ever!
And i mean it !

                     / Slaya

Re: Winter Song

thanks Slaya, it's comments like that that make me want to carry on.

nice picture by the way

Phill

Ask not what Chordie can do for you, but what you can do for Chordie.

Re: Winter Song

hi phil a lovely ode ,can almost hear you singing it well done...stay cool

love is life ,life is for love,keep a true heart and live life to the full....stay cool

Re: Winter Song

Hi Daddy,

In all honesty I never wrote it as a song, but if you feel inclined to musicise it please be my guest

Phill

Ask not what Chordie can do for you, but what you can do for Chordie.

Re: Winter Song

I love the imagery in this also.

Some mornings here recently, the mountains look like they have a lace veil over them.

Now lovely and all that it is , i really now want the sunshine!!

Old Doll

Why Blend in with the Crowd ? When you were made to stand out !

Re: Winter Song

Hi Old Doll,

Talking of sunshine, it's been nice here today, but a bitter cold wind..summers coming

Phill

[Would you mind very much if I call you Helena? as your handle? sounds a bit rude} smile

Ask not what Chordie can do for you, but what you can do for Chordie.

Re: Winter Song

No Problem  Phil,

with you calling me "Helena".

Have a happy Day.

Old Doll.

Why Blend in with the Crowd ? When you were made to stand out !