1 Topic by IBE (edited by IBE 2008-02-09 06:19:32)

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Topic: My own song

I don't have a name for it yet, and it's still not finished tongue

E|----------------------------------------------|
B|-----------1-----1-----1-1-1-----1-----1---|
G|-----------2-----2-----2-2-2---------------|   X2
D|--2-2-2-- 2-----2-----3-3-3-----2-----2--|
A|--2-2-2---------------------------3-----3--|
E|---------------------------------------------|

Info on playing:
Fast fast fast slow slow fast fast fast slow slow.

if you don't understand...reply back

Any comments or anything on the song please
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Re: My own song

Hi IBE
Welcome to chordie
So I think I read this as a chord progression of Emx3/ Amx2/Fma7with a A bassx3/Cx2. but I'm not sure thats what you had in mind with you tab diagram.
Well it's start and needs to develop futher before it will draw many comments.
Hope you come back later with a more finished song.
Good luck
Ark

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Re: My own song

Hi IBE,

Welcome to Chordie and I am afraid I can only second that Arkady has already said.

You have got your start. To complete your song you now need to expand the chord sequence with possibly a variation for a chorus and to work out some lyrics for it.

Good luck and do ask if you need help.

Roger

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Re: My own song

I am only 12 years old and I want to write a song but I dont want it to sound stupid. What should I do?

  • From: Woodbridge, VA, USA
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Re: My own song

Write one that doesn't sound stupid to you, then play the snot out of it.

Who cares what the world thinks.

Just play

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Re: My own song

jasonhague321 wrote:
Oldnewbie wrote:

Write one that doesn't sound stupid to you, then play the snot out of it.

Who cares what the world thinks.

rock an roll....

lol good advice though!

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Re: My own song

in all honesty, i didnt understand the tabs or the replies...does that make me crazy? tongue

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Re: My own song

Phill,

I don't think you could blame it all on that!  wink

Just play

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Re: My own song

Phill,

If you look at the original posting from IBE and Arkady's first reply, you will see that Ark, like I, have read the tabs as chords Em, Am, Fmaj7 and C. Read as chords I think you will see it makes sense although I am a bit unsure of the rhythm, 3 fast beats and 2 slow ones, it will be interesting to see how that pans out in a full song.

Please do not go crazy on us, we are only just getting to know you lol

Roger

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  • From: Woodbridge, VA, USA
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Re: My own song

I just played through this a couple of times...

kind of has a '70s feel to it.  nice.

can't wait to hear the rest, IBE.

Just play

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