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Yeah I'm just lazy, its the same chords on every verse and chorus as the first set, but I'll go ahead and fill 'em in for you. Srry about that...\
LR
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Ah Lastrebel,
GO GIRL! Thats such a good song.
Great great lyrics!
Have a good time in Jasper.
Old Doll.
wow i love the song!! its totally crackalakin, lol
have a good time with your cousin aye mate??
laters!!! love rhiannon xxoo 
I love this song, well done!
hi lastrebel a lovely song well done...stay cool
last_rebel, this is a song from an old soul!
Haunting and sweet - like it lots! James
hannah they have said it all really!
great lyrics girl!
But, 
can i say one thing? ok thanks. It is not bad...honest
See in the chorus, you have " and I" then you have in brackets ( hold on) ?
well usually when i see words in brackets I see it as backing singers
so when i was reading your wee song and had this tune in my head, and I got to the chorus and sang into myself " HOLD ON" after I was singing in my head " AND I.
I thought it was going ok until I got to (STRUM A FEW SECONDS)
this made me think, surely these are not lyrics It never took me long until I realised that " HOLD ON" was not the actual lyrics.
Nothing wrong with your writing, you have wrote it and explained very good. It is just me
well done
It is good to know I can laugh at my silliness
Ken
Well I got back, and yes I had a good time, and I brought my cuz back with me til tuesday
Thanks for the compliments yall....
James, an old soul? 17's still green man, but thanks anyway. Yall take it easy,
LR
Hi Rebel,
Loved your song and was having great fun giving it a thrash but sadly I ran out of chords all too soon. Please, when you write a great song like this, put the chords all the way through so a doddering old fogey like me is able to complete it and enjoy it to the end.
Thank you and well done,
Roger
Yeah I'm just lazy, its the same chords on every verse and chorus as the first set, but I'll go ahead and fill 'em in for you. Srry about that...\
LR
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Hi Last Rebel,
Read your lyrics, my guitar was handy, so I payed it slow 4/4 time.
I like your chord progression, but added a Gsus at the end of some of the verses to give it a bit of a lilt.
Lyrics: I can relate to them. I'm sort of going through a minor mid life crisis at present. I thought that all this shit was supposed to work itself out through your system aroung the 40s. I'm 60, and it's just starting to bite.
A good song, well done.
Regards & cheers
Kiwi John
Hi Last Rebel
Didn't really notice this first time around but glad i caught it now! Sounds great in my head but... please record and post it! Your write such great lyrics (are you sure you're only 17 ) I know everyone else who reads these posts feels the same way!
Thanks for sharing
Well thanks Rebel,
I have now been able to play "Slip Away" right through and it has made my evening. Great song. Thank you,
Roger
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