• From: QLD
  • Registered: 2007-03-04
  • Posts: 87

Topic: Song.::.CuRioSiTY - Rhiannon Gilson .:♥:.

This is my new song.. Hope you all like it - if someone wishes to change chords etc. then please do this song is yours as much as it is mine!

love rhiannon

VERSE 1

G        Bm
We are so electric
Em        D
Every touch we spark
G        Bm
Every time you look at me
Em        D
Will burn away my heart

G        Bm
So take this seriously
Em        D
I hope you’ll understand
G        Bm
I’m dying of curiosity
Em        C
Why don’t you hold my hand?

CHORUS

C        Am            D
To help me make it through tonight
G        Bm            D
I need somebody to hold me tight
C        Am            D
To make sure I am reassured
G        Bm            D
To help me if I do get hurt

VERSE 2

People go way too soon
I’m just hoping it won’t be you
Heaven baby aint for us
Please give more of trust

So take this seriously
I hope you’ll understand
Im dying of curiosity
Why don’t you hold my hand?

CHORUS

BRIDGE
Am       
If I am to love again
C
I’ll need someone there
Am
If I want to be loved again
C
I’ll need someone who cares
G
For you’re the only one
D
In my life right now
F   
Please come to me
Am
I need help….

CHORUS

Follow your heart
It usually makes the right decisions <3
  • Registered: 2007-04-03
  • Posts: 3,489

Re: Song.::.CuRioSiTY - Rhiannon Gilson .:♥:.

Hi Hinder  Rox07,

Great to hear from you again!

Love you new song Girl. Its a real girly song written from the heart. The best kind.

Well done to you.


Old Doll.

Why Blend in with the Crowd ? When you were made to stand out !
  • From: Almancil, Algarve, Portugal
  • Registered: 2006-09-02
  • Posts: 6,205

Re: Song.::.CuRioSiTY - Rhiannon Gilson .:♥:.

Rhiannon,

So sorry for the delay in commenting on your song. Firstly the chords do not need changing they flow fine and fit in well with the sentiment of your song. As for the lyrics, well the guy is an idiot, fancy not wanting to hold your hand. Mind you that might be a bit unfair, a lot of us chaps are very shy and frightened of rejection and so are reluctant to make the first move. Perhaps you should record it and 'accidently' let him hear it to give him the encouagement he needs. The lyrics are lovely, well done,

Roger

"Do, or do not; there is no try"

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  • From: Swansea, Wales, UK
  • Registered: 2008-01-13
  • Posts: 15

Re: Song.::.CuRioSiTY - Rhiannon Gilson .:♥:.

Hello.

Very very good song, really enjoyed struming it (G Major is my favourite key, so you made my day),

but whilst playing it, when it was building into the chorus instead of the C, i play C9, sounded quite good as the chorus starts with C.

But anyways, yeah, no compliants, very well written.

'This woman is so crazy, her feet don't touch the ground.'
  • From: QLD
  • Registered: 2007-03-04
  • Posts: 87

Re: Song.::.CuRioSiTY - Rhiannon Gilson .:♥:.

thank you all, and roger that is a very good idea i suppose i should speak to liam more often aye?? lol well thank you all for commenting on my lyrics and chords, temus99 i like the idea of the C9 being played instead of the normal C...it sounds alot better!

well for you all to know i will be posting more songs soon.
love you all!! love rhiannon xoxoxoxoxoxoxo big_smile

Follow your heart
It usually makes the right decisions <3