Topic: CREATION INC
A whimsical view of the first seven days of creation
Critique please!!
Kiwi John
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Re: CREATION INC
Hi John
Haven't played it, just read it through, but I really like the wit and humour. It sounds as though you have a very good understanding of the way the design and manufacturing process actually works in industry. I am an Engineer and recognise some of the scenarios you paint in the song.
It's a pity you can't demonstrate the melody, perhaps I will make one up later on.
Cheers
John
Re: CREATION INC
John Walding!
This is so so good. Terrific imagery in this piece,
i love when a song plays like a film as i read them.
Very Well Done.
Old Doll.
Why Blend in with the Crowd ? When you were made to stand out !
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Re: CREATION INC
This reminds of a scene at the the end of 'hitchiker's guide to the galaxy', (a movie which confused me sumthin terrible), where they were building earth in a giant factory. I would hate to think of heaven as a well oiled industrial machine (I'm afraid I wouldn't fit in), but all the same this song was alot of fun to read.
Are you sure it wouldn't be white suits? 
Take it easy 
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LR
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