Topic: Last time around

here's a new one. Hope you enjoy.
this song is best described as maybe an up-tempo country/southern rock style
4/4 beat
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E
Probably the last thing I expexted
A
probably the last time around
B
Maybe it won't be detected
A                                     E
I'm always the first to fall down

Vs II

E
I know the world it aint illusion
A
It has greatly amused me
B
All I know is just confusion
A                                        E
through the fog it's hard too see

VsIII

E
Remember when we where still naive
A
life was still easy and free
B
We knew what to believe
A                                E
now it's not so easy you see

Chorus

B                                           A
I've grown old and I've grown cold
B                               A
and i'm much less bold
B                              A                E
now that I know its all.........bought and sold

Instrumental (just play through the first three verses)
and pick up the lyrics back on the chorus

Repeat 1st three verses and chorus

Extended chorus

B                                            A
I rested long and tried to grow strong
B                             A
Thought about a song 
B                       A                       E
but to make it out........just took to long

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I look forward to your comments/critiques..

Re: Last time around

I like the way these verses are set up, its also in E which is one of my favorite keys. I'm wondering if its supposed to sound bluesy?
I like this one,
    rested long and tried to grow strong
B                             A
Thought about a song 
B                       A                       E
but to make it out........just took to long

I've been THERE a million times... anyway nice one. Keep em comin' big_smile,
   LR

All You Need is Love smile

Re: Last time around

I do like this song JamesWright,

B                                           A
I've grown old and I've grown cold
B                               A
and i'm much less bold
B                              A                E
now that I know its all.........bought and sold


I would have to change this line for myself!  "And im much more bold!" I figure at this stage  of my life i dont have to much to lose lol

Old Doll.

Why Blend in with the Crowd ? When you were made to stand out !