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Topic: The crapsong

Am          C        G                             Am
I’m just a lousy writer who thinks he is the best
   Am           C         G                                     Am
I know some words, I know some chords, maybe a lot,
  Am                                G
But they are like eggs in a nest
   Am                                 G
Hidden somewhere, so they can rest

    E                                       Am
To open one day, if not broken or rotten.
    E                             Am
I’m so afraid to be forgotten

BRIDGE
    Ebm                       Bbmaj                Ebm
Fragile music, lyrics like moths or butterflies,
    Ebm                       Bbmaj                  Ebm
Worthless words in a worthless world, full of lies

       B                                          E
No my friends, this is not longer paradise
       B                                  E         B                          E
Whatever we try, what ever we do, only the sun will always rise


Am           C         G                                       Am
Why do we want to change this world, turning around
Am              C       G                                    Am
24 hours, day after day, without producing a sound
  Am                                             G
Where is our respect , where is our pride
  Am                                       G
Going up and down just like the tide
    E                                        Am
Before it’s too late, take one last ride
   E                                        Am
‘cause when it’s dark, I like to slide

BRIDGE
  Ebm                                     Bbmaj              Ebm
I am a looser trying to write poems and reading books
   Ebm                                   Bbmaj                Ebm
Awful to do this knowing that those lyrics sucks.

           B                                  E
I’m a thinker, a clown, with painted tears
           B                                     E
On a face too white, since many years
Am              C                G                           Am
My happiness is to love all people, difficult these days
Am               C                G                            Am
Respect yourselves a difficult step, but it works always,
   Am                                         G
Crap or crab, does it matters a lot to me
  Am                                   G
I don’t think, I am what you see
      E                                      B
I am just dust, glue it together and that’s me
    E                                         B

So as you see, is this sense or non sense?
I like it, because it's mine of course, AND AS TOLD: CRITICS por favor
Gracias, El DocPhil

[color=blue]- GITAARDOCPHIL SAIS: TO CONQUER DEAD, YOU HAVE TO DIE[/color]   AND [color=blue] we are born to die[/color]
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  • From: BELGIUM
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Re: The crapsong

Is there a way to avoid these difficult chords? They fit good in this "song??", but please feel free to suggest other words, other sequences of words, even chords.
This really helps me, and it improves my writing.
Most of my songs, have some lyrics even writing lalala.
This is for me the place to be.
WHY THIS QUESTION: because I am
- a perfectionist
- a controle freak
- I want to be loved by everyone, which is impossible of course
- I am "greedy" to learn.
- I feel happy, and I love people
- I love life, day after day, even knowing that they took every physical thing I've got a second chance, I died, but they brought me back, twice.
- I know what it feels to die:
1) angry, mad and very aggressive feelings, followed by
2) the knowledge that you won't come back starts to calm you
3) a state of happiness, having the time to thank your beloved ones
4) BLACK, BLACK & BLACK

[color=blue]- GITAARDOCPHIL SAIS: TO CONQUER DEAD, YOU HAVE TO DIE[/color]   AND [color=blue] we are born to die[/color]
- MY GUITAR PLAYS EVERY STYLE = BLUES, ROCK, METAL, so I NEED TO LEARN HOW TO PLAY IT.
[color=blue]Civilization began the first time an angry person cast a word instead of a rock.[/color]

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  • Registered: 2007-04-03
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Re: The crapsong

Docphil!

Go raibh mile maith agat. Thank you very Much!
I very much enjoyed reading this piece of yours

          B                                  E
I’m a thinker, a clown, with painted tears
           B                                     E
On a face too white, since many years
Am              C                G                           Am
My happiness is to love all people, difficult these days
Am               C                G                            Am
Respect yourselves a difficult step, but it works always,

Well done to you.

Love to you Rockdoc! Keep well.

Slán

Old Doll.

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  • From: BELGIUM
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Re: The crapsong

Thanks doll, for once I really loved this. It is difficult to tell: boys and girls I have written a great song.
The B ------------ E is sung with a kind of "hard rock voice"
Can I improve these lyrics?, or is there a CHORD SEQUENCE that would sound better, feel free to give me advise.

[color=blue]- GITAARDOCPHIL SAIS: TO CONQUER DEAD, YOU HAVE TO DIE[/color]   AND [color=blue] we are born to die[/color]
- MY GUITAR PLAYS EVERY STYLE = BLUES, ROCK, METAL, so I NEED TO LEARN HOW TO PLAY IT.
[color=blue]Civilization began the first time an angry person cast a word instead of a rock.[/color]

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