a New Years wish

If I place a song on this site, it isn't to show how good or how bad I am.
What I love to see is a kind of "jury", people telling me: your lyrics sucks, but if you change this or that, it can be a nice song.
About the melody = impossible to judge, maybe if 100 guitar players, play the chords, there has to be at least one who plays it real close like you like to play it.
Probably we "chordians" are afraid to hurt someone else.
It is so easy, if you don't want that people give there opinion, you have 2 possibilities:
1) you don't post it
2) you ask the others to avoid critics and comments.

My intention is, using a language which is not mine, and trying to post a song, as a 'virgin" writer, to have at least some critics, in a constructive civilised answer.
Like: your song, or LYRICS would be better if you write I LOVE YOU in stead of LOVE I YOU.

I really don't know if you agree with me, as I told, I have maybe 500 songs, and it's not always easy for me, and probably others too, to use the right words. If a song sucks, well maybe it can be improved. This, is ONLY POSSIBLE if you post comment.
We all try to do the best we can, and of course it would be maybe hard if someone told me to delete it, but at least I tried and I will delete it, IF THERE ARE A FEW PEOPLE telling me why.
When I play,  most of my stuff is instrumental, followed by lyrics. I am maybe a controle freak, but I really love comment, but again who am I to decide this.
Or maybe the "songwriting section" is just to post a song, before you go to sleep.
I AM ABSOLUTELY NOT AFRAID BY CRITICS, GOOD OR BAD, IF IT WILL HELP ME TO IMPROVE.
I DON'T HAVE ANY PROBLEM IF SOMEONE SHOULD "EDIT" AND CORRECT WORDS, OR PHRASES