Satirical Song (what do you think?)

Hey there, im working on this one still, i'd like to see what people here thought of it. Slightly satirical, kinda humorous.

the whole song uses a simple strum pattern, a

one and a two, three e and a four e and a

pattern. if you know how to count that. im assuming you do.

Intro:  Fmaj7               Emin (x2)

Verse: Fmaj7               Emin (x4)

Bridge: G         D            C          Em (x2)

Verse

Bridge

Chorus: G           C (x3) , D    C

Verse

Bridge

Chorus

Outro: Same as intro

Anyway, those are the chords, here's the lyrics. the timimgs pretty simple.

The first time you stabbed me, i knew it would be true

The girl i saw in the police lineup, well i knew that it was you

And now we're together, i dropped the charges, and you know that its right

And i know its true love when i see the sun glinting off your gun so bright

I know that you're a bit different, your not like the other girls

I know that your homicide charges dont mean nothing in this world

But you see, when we die, we'll go someplace else

And im not sure you'll be with me, cause i know that ... (next four lines are the chorus)

Its illegal to carry guns in heaven

Its illegal to carry guns in heaven

Its illegal to carry guns in heaven

But thats ok, i love you anyway

I havent thought up the second half of the song, but you get the idea.

Well anyway, tell me what you think

Thanks!