Topic: Life, the Dance

Something romantic for the Dolls out there..marcalan





Life, The Dance                                               m.mcvicker  2007



Can I tell you,... what I saw today?
So far, and up; away?
Two lovers, at dance, in the air.

The stage was set for the loving duet
with blue and white cotton clouds.

They turned and they soared
and I thought the crowd roared
for the two, in love with the air.
The dip and the dive, they both had arrived
to give to those who would take time to see.

Their timing? Precise, wing tips on ice.
They respected each others' next move.
A loop without care, to the other, a dare.
A glance; to make my art to prove.
 
And then, as if by chance,
they had noticed their dance.

Their exit was swift and sure.

SOLO

I lost them to others, that might,
look up from their druthers,
and breathe, peace to recieve.
All the things we fight.
To see what life has in sight.
Just to rest, and believe.

I thought ; If I had one idea,
and took it from beginning to end.
I would try another.

Re: Life, the Dance

Good Morning Marcalan,

Beautiful piece as always.


Their timing? Precise, wing tips on ice".

"I love this line". It reminded me of a few things.. This song which i do sing.

http://ie.youtube.com/watch?v=-jb9N5qhe6A

Been to see Garth Brooks. His shows are some of the best Shows ive been to.

Also the mountains near my home, this morning have a lacey veil of crisp white frost. So beautiful to the eye. I reckon your eye would appreciate this image.

Have a good day and Thank You.

Old Doll

Why Blend in with the Crowd ? When you were made to stand out !

Re: Life, the Dance

Thanks, my friend. The Garth video gave me some ideas about music for this. I'll write more larter on the other channel; only on my second cup o'jo...marcalan

I thought ; If I had one idea,
and took it from beginning to end.
I would try another.