Hey Jas, want to see what you can do with this?

Sorry but I wanted to give it a try myself...throw it away if you don't like it

[em/d]I need to find some peace of mind
In between these city [d]walls
[em/d]The clones are marching right in line
The concrete bars they stand so [d]tall
I [d#]try to walk against the grain
And it rubs some people [d]sore
I [em/d]have to try and stake a claim
On what's been done [d]before

[em/d]Seven days to waste the time
A hundred ways to lose your [d]mind
A [em/d]thousand faces in the crowd
A million voices all out [d]loud
[d#]Try to pick and choose your game
Your very own stereo [d]type
[em/d]Make a meaning for your name
Try to live up to the [d]hype

The [em/d]rythym of an unseen drum
Keeps us all marching to the [d]tune
Of the [em/d]mob society made
Keeps us howling at the [d]moon
[d#]Even trying to stand alone
Makes you fall in with a [d]group
[em/d]We all wear the uniforms
Of our own respective [d]troops

Played like this
em/d = xx0000 d = xx0232 d# = xxx343

What do you think?
Again toss it if you don't like it but I though it sounded right...

Try to live up to the hype
even though its lost on you
dont sit and cry and ask me why

   Good stuff ,
          Still not exactly sure where to go as far as music, I played around with an intro using the D and D# last night, the E minors work in there but I think it needs another chord to even it out. (By the way thanks jets, those chords gave me something to work with, I think i'm gonna put together an intro and maybe move the chords around a bit to build up in places)
Anyway looks great Jas, I think we did a good job.

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