1 Topic by marcalan (edited by marcalan 2007-11-04 22:13:13)

  • From: Chico, Ca.
  • Registered: 2007-09-08
  • Posts: 327

Topic: Anyone have days like this?

Marcalan's Nightmare                    marcalan mcvicker 2002

I know, I'm startin' late.
You know, I had things to do.
Just cause my tire went flat.
Don't mean, I ain't lovin' you!
                                                                                                                                 
But my dog ate my homework,
and my pants are inside out.
Don't think, I was up to no good.
This is what my lifes' been about.

I forgot my locker combination.
My motorcycle ain't as fast as yours.
My dog is dead, but he's still my best friend.
And I missed my train at the station!

It was like that when I got here.
This thing ain't workin' right.
The toilet keeps on runnin' on.
The lids are on too tight!

I had two wives that left me.
I'm not sure just what went wrong.
Maybe you'll stand up and tell me,
After you hear this song.

But I'm in my underwear, at high school.
You show up, but I don't care.
I'd like to get to know you.
But I think I'm loosing my hair!

I thought ; If I had one idea,
and took it from beginning to end.
I would try another.

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  • Registered: 2007-04-03
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Re: Anyone have days like this?

Hi Marcalans,

This piece feels like its full of anxiety? Is this what you intended?

Its not focused somehow.

Come on now! explain Please!

Old Doll.

Why Blend in with the Crowd ? When you were made to stand out !
  • From: Paisley, Scotland
  • Registered: 2006-07-09
  • Posts: 337

Re: Anyone have days like this?

Love the line "My dog is dead but he's still my best friend" something very cool and touching about that.

All I got, is a red guitar, three chords and the truth

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  • From: Chico, Ca.
  • Registered: 2007-09-08
  • Posts: 327

Re: Anyone have days like this?

OK, Old Doll
Well.,well, da,da,dada,ohohohoooo,Woman how can i explain[john lennon]......
I suppose there is angx in there but what dreams haunt people? Frustration is my guess but the reality of this is is what people go through for excuses of why they don't meet other 's expectations and why why would they care.No focus. I am who I am, my wives? , well,well, da,da dada, ohoh oo,woman.......marcalan...ain't bein' smart' alan

I thought ; If I had one idea,
and took it from beginning to end.
I would try another.

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  • From: Hendersonville, NC USA
  • Registered: 2006-03-04
  • Posts: 2,521

Re: Anyone have days like this?

Hey Marcalan - Love the lyrics but would like to know how it sounds.

Thanks,

Jeff

J  E  T  S
...and yet a Washington Commanders fan (unless they change their name again) ...long story...HTT...C

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  • Registered: 2007-04-03
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Re: Anyone have days like this?

Thanks for the reply Marcalan!

I wasnt looking for your personal story! Just trying to understand the song!

Advice!  "Only worry about People if your needing there approval"

Song! Woman! One of my all time favourites.

Another Song in your reply?" Others Expectations".

30 years ago. i never seen my life as it is now. Totally different to what i imagined,  but not a bad place. We makes our choices".

Slán

Old Doll.

Why Blend in with the Crowd ? When you were made to stand out !
  • From: derbyshire
  • Registered: 2007-05-17
  • Posts: 2,844

Re: Anyone have days like this?

hi marcalan if go'ing by the song it sounds to me like you're trying to run before you can walk,you need to slow down and take stock of everything and start again....stay cool

love is life ,life is for love,keep a true heart and live life to the full....stay cool

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