Topic: Stupid Secrets

Most of my poems have just one inspiration......everything revolves around her.

I read somewhere that there are rules to be followed in poetry, and that there is no such thing as a unique pattern to poetry. Basically it said that if you write something that is not traditionally in rhythm, it doesn't count as poetry. I don't believe in that, so everytime I write, I try to avoid the cliché poetic rhythm that I have read all my life, as I'm drawn a lot towards something funky happening with the flow of a piece, and thus I tend to always put some efforts to break out of any predictive rhythm in my poems
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Quiet! The walls can hear you
Your story is intriguing
To say the least

Hold! The breeze will reveal—
That what shouldn't be shared
Not just with the living
But even more the deceased

Till you are certain
Till you can be sure
Let all be oblivious
Not a soul should know
Lay low, bro, lay low! 

"I hide behind a mirror of knowledge, I'm never that what you see
It is my wisdom that emanates, and is perceived by you as me"

#penned #not_stolen

Re: Stupid Secrets

What can  say? BRILLIANT     

Ask not what Chordie can do for you, but what you can do for Chordie.

Re: Stupid Secrets

Good on ya break the so called ``rules``
how can you be original following a template?     

The King Of Audio Torture

Re: Stupid Secrets

Phill Williams wrote:

What can  say? BRILLIANT

I mean you could say other things.....I would love to hear more
Thanks!!     

"I hide behind a mirror of knowledge, I'm never that what you see
It is my wisdom that emanates, and is perceived by you as me"

#penned #not_stolen

Re: Stupid Secrets

easybeat wrote:

Good on ya break the so called ``rules``
how can you be original following a template?

Right......and anyways, I'm not sure if nursery rhymes can be applied everywhere.

I won't deny that I have written some simple rhymes as well, but I ended up keeping most on the back burner     

"I hide behind a mirror of knowledge, I'm never that what you see
It is my wisdom that emanates, and is perceived by you as me"

#penned #not_stolen