1 Topic by Ryuusei (edited by Ryuusei 2024-09-04 19:04:21)

  • From: India
  • Registered: 2024-09-01
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Topic: Admittance x Pudency

This one's a bit gore....I dunno, I was a kid back when I wrote it and thought about writing non-love stuff........
It's that and then today, I still cannot replicate this...!!
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GAWD!!
It ain’t odd
When I nod
With ease
To please
A tease
A sick
Petty trick
By a wit (rude words not allowed edit by Phill)
It’s just
I know I must
Not bust
A hopeful try
(sure a bit dry)
End it in a cry
Rather crack
Some nasty payback
So you laugh till you rack
Your intestines
The vital spine’s
Fragments several times
Then cough up blood
But hey bud!
I’ll still wait
Till late
To make you state
That the joke you made
WAS A DUD!!

"I hide behind a mirror of knowledge, I'm never that what you see
It is my wisdom that emanates, and is perceived by you as me"

#penned #not_stolen
  • From: The Land Of Song
  • Registered: 2007-12-10
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Re: Admittance x Pudency

A view on life around you at the time. Great poem but I had to remove the swear word as we don't allow bad language on Chordie. Thanks for posting     

Ask not what Chordie can do for you, but what you can do for Chordie.

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  • From: India
  • Registered: 2024-09-01
  • Posts: 37

Re: Admittance x Pudency

Thanks Phill......I overlooked that part, should've changed it myself. Thanks for the edit though!!     

"I hide behind a mirror of knowledge, I'm never that what you see
It is my wisdom that emanates, and is perceived by you as me"

#penned #not_stolen