• TIGLJK
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Topic: Sound cloud version of my song - In My Eyes

Here it is - and once again, apologies for the singing smile
Let me know what you think - all comments and suggestions  are appreciated

Jim

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Re: Sound cloud version of my song - In My Eyes

Very good Jim. A tad long maybe at almost 6 minutes, but the melody and especially your words and phrasing are excellent.     

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Re: Sound cloud version of my song - In My Eyes

Thanks Phill

I took your advice - switched it up and took out the repeated verse.  I like it much better.
I will try to a re-do on the recording soon .

See - that's why I need you guys here on chordie to help me.

Thank you !!!

Now if you could only wave your magic wand make me able to sing !:)

Jim     

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Re: Sound cloud version of my song - In My Eyes

Lovely song Jim, well written and agree, take out the repeat verse to shorten it and its good to go.  Nice one smile     

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