• From: Wellington New Zealand
  • Registered: 2010-03-24
  • Posts: 1,388

Topic: on the hill

there was a man
up on the hill
head in the clouds
standing quite still
such deep concentration
he was staring out
i wondered to myself
whats that   all about
on closer inspection
i felt such a fool
for that was a statue
up on the hill 

The King Of Audio Torture
  • Registered: 2015-07-31
  • Posts: 2,793

Re: on the hill

Clever and you got a unique style of writing EB.