Topic: Ah, Morning

This was inspired by Peatles recent poem "Mother with the lost child" and the sounds, smells and atmosphere of a summer s morning

Ah, Morning.

6 a.m.

A glow on the dark sky
Fading stars on the eastern horizon pre-empts
The rising of our golden orb.
Birds come to life and chirp, squeak, flutter and fly
Breakfast of worms and crawling things
There's a scurrying as creatures of the night
Keep to the shadows on their way home and safety.

Ah, morning

The sun is now making it's way towards the west.
It seems to roll over roof tops and tree tops
While sometimes hiding behind red clouds that fade away...slowly
The aroma of baking bread pleases my senses
As the baker empties his oven and stacks the warm loaves.
But that is not the only gift as bacon fries in cafes and kitchens.
Grass is being cut by a council worker in the park
The scent is heady and pleasant.

Now the once deserted road fills with cars and vans
Busses and lorries all on their way somewhere
Petrol, diesel and now electric hum
Cars, bikes and scooters pass by with little sound
While exhaust fumes still fill the air
How much longer? the inquisitive ask
Ah...clear my mind... smells, scent, perfume
An olfactory orgasm

9 a.m.

Bread, bacon, new mown grass...heaven
And I think...
It's good to be alive 

Ask not what Chordie can do for you, but what you can do for Chordie.

Re: Ah, Morning

Phill
What an awesome description.
I felt like i was experiencing the things you described.
Loved how it also changed the focus as it went on. great line to finish - "an olfactory orgasm" !

I'll be using that line in the near future, I am sure.

Thanks  sharing it - very cool.

Cheers

Jim     

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Re: Ah, Morning

love the imagery,would make a great short video.
its a great example to anyone that claims they cant write anything
look around theres inspiration right in front of you every day.     

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Re: Ah, Morning

Piri, this poem everything in it that makes it an exceptional piece of writing.     

Re: Ah, Morning

Thank to Jim, Brian and Pedr (Peatle) seriously its just observations on a typical summers morning. Jim, you have my permission to use that line. Brian, it never occurred to me to make it into a video, I know they once experimented with smellyvision...imagine watching it on your TV as the smell of bacon cooking filled your room, you'd never get to the end the frying pan would be on while you searched the fridge for bacon, sausage and eggs...my stomach just rumbled...
Pedr, I owe a lot to you for this poem, written in your style, don't sue me pal, buddy, brother?     

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Re: Ah, Morning

Cleverly written Phill, makes it easy to visualize.     

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