1 (edited by TIGLJK 2022-10-21 18:55:59)

Topic: My November song

I wrote this song today - didn't want to break my string of songs using all of the words suggested for song of the month. It was a tougher challenge- but I think it came out okay. ( I even managed to add a few words associated with water not on Jan's list!:)

I will re-submit it in the November SOTM  thread when it opens.
Hope you like it.....  it is structured a bit different.

Water Love by Jim Kenyon


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Verse 1


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[C]My heart is beating faster, as your [G]arms pull me close


If [F]someone’s gonna find you, then you [C]better let them know


our [F] lips meet for the first time, I don’t know [C]why I close my eyes


but it [G]kind of caught me off guard, and [F]took me by sur[C]prise




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Verse 2


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[C]For so long now I have felt lost, but [G]now I’m feeling found


my [F]soul feels so free, hard to [C]keep both feet on the ground


Not [F]sure where this is going, but I [C] know how I hope it ends


Like a [G]dream come true, tell me, is [F] this is how love be[C]gins




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Chorus


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Seems [F]Love is like water, the foun[C]dation of all life


it be[G]gins with just a drop, like a [F]touch in the [C]night


A gentle [F]mist, a sprinkle, that be[C]comes a summer rain


Just as [G]love keeps on growing, it can [F]drown out any [C]pain


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Yeah [F]Love is like a river, as it [C]connects the land to the sea


like a [G]stream to a pond, and the [F]joining of you and [C]me


Love can [F] be large like an ocean, always[C] true, never fake


Finding [G] love is so beautiful, like a fall [F]reflection on a [C] lake




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(Repeat) Verse1


[C]My heart is beating faster, as your [G]arms pull me close


If [F]someone’s gonna find you, then you [C]better let them know


our [F] lips meet for the first time, I don’t know [C]why I close my eyes


but it [G]kind of caught me off guard, and [F]took me by sur[C]prise




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Verse 3


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[C] I can’t explain how it feels, but it just [G]puts my mind at ease


I’ve [F]never felt this way before, I’m just[F] floating on the breeze


It’s[F] like watching springtime flowers bloom, or [C] walking on the shore


It’s the [G] first time I’ve been happy, and I [F]couldn’t ask for [C] more


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It’s[F] like watching springtime flowers bloom, or [C] walking on the shore


It’s the [G] first time I’ve been happy, and I [F]couldn’t ask for [C] more



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Re: My November song

Ah yes -A new love is always special, or I guess it is falling in love. Loved your words. You captured all that comes with the first feelings of love. I look forward to hearing how it sounds as well.     

J  E  T  S
...and yet a Washington Commanders fan (unless they change their name again) ...long story...HTT...C

Re: My November song

excellent! the way your words fall together, there are so many "hooks" the lines that catch the listener/readers attention. great song     

Ask not what Chordie can do for you, but what you can do for Chordie.

Re: My November song

Well written Jim, I look forward to hearing it in November.     

Re: My November song

Jim, very clever to incorporate all those words, I applaud you.  I like the song itself too and agree with jets, that it definitely has that first love feel to it smile     

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