Topic: Ronnie and the Rockits

Hi  Guys
would  you please  give  us  some  feed back  on these   three tracks  from   our  band
https://soundcloud.com/user-600541469 

2 (edited by Grah1 2022-08-25 20:08:27)

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This  is  a  link  to  the  face book  page we are  setting  up   drop us  a  message  and  have  a  look .

   https://www.facebook.com/Ronnie-The-Roc … 329218146/

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Grah
sounds like a fun band     

The King Of Audio Torture

4 (edited by Jandle 2022-08-26 03:18:51)

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Had a listen, some good sounds in there.  I bet you have lots of fun together performing.  Is Ronnie the main vocalist that I could hear?  3 guitarists, 1 drummer  and lead singer? Awesome Grah1, must be so much fun.

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Yeah   its  a  classic  5 piece     

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good to see you are doing some lesser known 60s songs     

The King Of Audio Torture

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Ronnie And The Rockets interesting repertoire and a good band name.     

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Graham

Sounded great - loved the songs except - knocking on Heavens door. Thought the timing or voicing of the lyrics was off.
Still-  it is awesome you and the boys can do this.. Great sound - lots of fun - I am jealous !

Jim     

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Hi Jim thanks for the honest feed back  we appreciate constructive comments  it helps us to improve .We currently have about 15 songs in the set and are working on another 9  classics.Watch this space .     

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Graham

How long does it take to get a band to be able to nail a song completely ?  If you are adding nine songs it must take quite a bit of practice and tweaking.
Have you been playing together a long time.

I ask you these questions bc I know it takes me a long time just to remember the lyrics smile

and as to my critique of the song, I am an expert on bad timing and voicing bc all my songs are that way smile     

I am looking forward to your new posts on the songs !  Once again , I AM SOOOO JEALOUS - I wish I had the talent to be a performer.

Jim     

Your vision is not limited by what your eye can see, but what your mind can imagine.
Make your life count, and the world will be a better place because you tried.

"Use the talents you possess, for the woods would be very silent if no birds sang except only the the best." - Henry Van Dyke

11 (edited by Grah1 2022-08-31 20:20:59)

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Time  to  nail a  song   depends   on a  few  things  Jim  , Do all  the band  members  know  the  song  ,or  is it new  and  original .  . The  Current  set  with this  band  has  taken   twelve  months  to  get the  set  to  the level  we are  at  . We have  been playing together  in various  forms  for  about two years . However  with my old  band  it was  possible  to be  asked  for  a  song in the  morning and we  could  rehearse  and  play a  reasonable  version  that evening . But  we  had  been together   for    10  yrs   .
I remember  doing a  gig  some  years  ago  at  a  small club  in London ,which was   supposed to be  me  and an acoustic  guitar ,when I  arrived  I found  a  bunch of  my mates  had turned up  to back me   and  we had  an hour  to  choose  a dozen songs  before we  were  due on    The  guys  were  fantastic  and  we  nailed  every song straight off  and  it was  great   except  I forgot the  starting line  of  David Crosbys  Cowboy movie  song , I was  15 yrs   younger  though LOL  .
Re  confidence  to  perform  Jim   you  write   great  songs  and  should  go  out  and  play  them  ,But  choose  a  venue  which  respects  its  players and  listens  to  the  content  of  the  songs .
We  are  lucky   over  here  in the  UK  as  the  folk  clubs  make sure  the audience  is  quiet   during performances   as  do  some  of  the  better   open mics ,Give  it  a  go  you  have  a  great   and   unusual voice    which   I'm sure   people  will  listen to  and  enjoy .

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Not sure if you're looking for comments on the musicianship or the recordings; but the singer needs to control his mic a bit better; I can hear a load of plosives in "Tamborine Man" (sometimes a wind shield can stop these, even a stocking over a piece of wire frame can keep his mouth a bit further from the mic). There are some mixing issues in "Knocking" in a couple of places; I'm presuming that's a guy singing falsetto for the backing, as he's delivering strongly in some parts, but fading in others ... personally with a vocal like that, I'd usually double it and pan it in extreme left and right mixes. They also need to decide if they are following the chord progression or the melody, as it seems to be a mix of both. During the second solo, with the guitar, the band seems undecided if they are going all in, and the rhythm guitar goes louder, but the rest of the band stays the same volume. It sounds as if the bass player wants to get there, but is being held back by the drummer. It also would have been good to add some 'ooh's and 'ahh's in there to reinforce the sound. I haven't heard "Never get over you before", and it started out strong, there was a point which could have done with some extra instrumentation (around the middle of the song), like a solo or something. There's also something with the drummers cymbal or high-hat I couldn't quite put my finger on, sounded like he had a sizzle in there.

In all three songs the musicianship sounds ok, everything sounds reasonably tight, apart from sections of the dynamics, but that;'s something I find comes with working together for a long time, particularly with bass and drums, I guess my main questions would be about whom these recordings are for? If it's a demo to sell yourself to a publican, I reckon you'll get the gig, if it's memories for the band and punters, you'll be ok there as well. If it's for a release, then there are areas to improve.

Hope that was helpful in some way; also hope I picked the right three songs, as I saw you have a couple of others on sound cloud with the same date.

Please keep going and posting new songs, most of the stuff I mention is easily fixable, and it's always different in a live setting compared to recordings!!

Cheers

Richard     

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TIGLJK wrote:

I wish I had the talent to be a performer.

Jim

Sorry, but I'm going to pick on this statement, because you *do* have the talent, it's up to you to use it ....

Cheers

Richard     

-[ Musician, writer, guitarist, singer ]-
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neophytte wrote:
TIGLJK wrote:

I wish I had the talent to be a performer.

Jim

Sorry, but I'm going to pick on this statement, because you *do* have the talent, it's up to you to use it ....

Cheers

Richard

Agree!! just need to find a way to use it.     

The King Of Audio Torture

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easybeat wrote:
neophytte wrote:
TIGLJK wrote:

I wish I had the talent to be a performer.

Jim

Sorry, but I'm going to pick on this statement, because you *do* have the talent, it's up to you to use it ....

Cheers

Richard

Agree!! just need to find a way to use it.

Jim you do write great songs and your performances have their own unique quality in what I call a Bob Dylan way.. You are a truly talented songwriter.