• From: The Land Of Song
  • Registered: 2007-12-10
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Topic: new song

there's no title to this yet. i've been trying to finish it for weeks, looking for a chorus and bridge. I finally got the bridge (I think) here it is written below.


Take me back to where we were.
Alone just you and I.
We'll ride upon our shooting star.
And float across the sky. 

Ask not what Chordie can do for you, but what you can do for Chordie.

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Re: new song

Nice !  I like it Phill     

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  • From: Hendersonville, NC USA
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Re: new song

Agree with Jim - Very nice!     

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  • From: Wellington New Zealand
  • Registered: 2010-03-24
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Re: new song

come on Phill lets get this done,im waiting to hear it!     

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  • From: The Land Of Song
  • Registered: 2007-12-10
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Re: new song

Brian. Aren't we all. I need to finish it first. Thanks.

Jeff. Thanks for that. It didn't come out as I heard it in my head.

Jim. Where do these words come from? One minute you're dreaming of puppies next these words pop in your head! Thanks to all for looking and nice comments.     

Ask not what Chordie can do for you, but what you can do for Chordie.

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