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Topic: PENANCE

135 BPM
V1:
E5
Bigger than life when you walk to in a room
C#5                         B5
Show a great smile for all to see
E5
No one knows if its too soon
C#5                    B5
Future seems to cast its doom.

V2:
A                                                    Asus       A
Shields are battered, armor’s  wearing  thin
A                                                               Asus   A
The weights gotten heavy where do I         begin?
G                              C         G
false hope  keeps on finding me
G                                       C          G
Who is out there with the proper key?

[Interlude]
A - - - A - - -A - - - C - - A    A - - - A - - -A - - - C - - A
A - - - A - - -A - - - C - - A    A - - - A - - -A - - - C - - A

CH:
A                                                    Asus       A
Shields are battered, armor’s  wearing  thin
A                                                               Asus   A
The weights gotten heavy where do I         begin?
G                              C         G
false hope  keeps on finding me
G                                       C          G
Who is out there with the proper key?



V3
E5
You thought you slayed the dragon
C#5                         B5
Thought you past the test
E5
Then the shield is destroyed
C#5                                 B5
Armor being stomped into your chest



V4
A                                                   Asus       A
Shields are battered, armor’s  wearing  thin
A                                                 Asus   A
The shell starts to stink and rust   within
G                                                  C           G
When does penance stop and love be - -gin
G                                                  C           G
When does penance stop and love be - -gin


CH:
A                                                    Asus       A
Shields are battered, armor’s  wearing  thin
A                                                               Asus   A
The weights gotten heavy where do I         begin?
G                              C         G
false hope  keeps on finding me
G                                       C          G
Who is out there with the proper key?

[Interlude 2]
A - - - A - - -A - - - C - - A    A - - - A - - -A - - - C - - A
A - - - A - - -A - - - C - - A    A - - - A - - -A - - - C - - A

Repeat V3
E5
You thought you slayed the dragon
C#5                         B5
Thought you past the test
E5
Then the shield is destroyed
C#5                                 B5
Armor being stomped into your chest


[Outtro]

E5
The the shield is destroyed
C#5                                 B5
Armor being stomped into your chest
E5
All for love be tween girls and boys
C#5                                   B5
Gasping for air do you make a noise

“Find your own sound.  Dont be a second rateYngwie Malmsteen be a first rate you”

– George Lynch 2013 (Dokken, Lynchmob, KXM, Tooth & Nail etc....)

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Re: PENANCE

Beamer

Sounds like this knight needs a new castle to find a damsel that truly needs him.
Interesting correlation in the lyrics.

Get on your steed and ride, young man ride !
It seems the known keeps haunting the old castle.  Search for new opportunity,

Just my humble interpretation. 

Thanks for sharing - I'd like to hear how it is played and sung.
I'm sure it is "metalized" ( and oh the irony there - metal ARMOR, METAL SONG! smile ) somehow
Jim

Your vision is not limited by what your eye can see, but what your mind can imagine.
Make your life count, and the world will be a better place because you tried.

"Use the talents you possess, for the woods would be very silent if no birds sang except only the the best." - Henry Van Dyke
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Re: PENANCE

TIGLJK wrote:

Beamer

Sounds like this knight needs a new castle to find a damsel that truly needs him.
Interesting correlation in the lyrics.

Get on your steed and ride, young man ride !
It seems the known keeps haunting the old castle.  Search for new opportunity,

Just my humble interpretation. 

Thanks for sharing - I'd like to hear how it is played and sung.
I'm sure it is "metalized" ( and oh the irony there - metal ARMOR, METAL SONG! smile ) somehow
Jim

It can go just about anyway .  4/4 3/4 acoustic or heavy LOL     

“Find your own sound.  Dont be a second rateYngwie Malmsteen be a first rate you”

– George Lynch 2013 (Dokken, Lynchmob, KXM, Tooth & Nail etc....)
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OH and working on a recording.  May just be instrumental.  I need a good 135 BPM back beat.     

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Re: PENANCE

Those are brilliant lyrics Beamer that could work with music played in all sorts of genres. I like the way those lyrics are open to all sorts of back stories.     

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TIGLJK wrote:

I'm sure it is "metalized" ( and oh the irony there - metal ARMOR, METAL SONG! smile ) somehow
Jim

OH and I just remembered, there used to be a band called ARMORED SAINT! LOL big_smile (The lead singer was John Bush, he left to join Anthrax for many years)     

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I re-arranged the song a bit on the last edit.     

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Re: PENANCE

I was looking for this song. Thanks     

wilbertking's Website

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Ok I dropped an important verse when I did my last edit.  So edit 3 gets it back in.

“Find your own sound.  Dont be a second rateYngwie Malmsteen be a first rate you”

– George Lynch 2013 (Dokken, Lynchmob, KXM, Tooth & Nail etc....)

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Re: PENANCE

Peatle Jville wrote:

Those are brilliant lyrics Beamer that could work with music played in all sorts of genres. I like the way those lyrics are open to all sorts of back stories.

Quite,
But it still comes down the mans eternal search for true love.

“Find your own sound.  Dont be a second rateYngwie Malmsteen be a first rate you”

– George Lynch 2013 (Dokken, Lynchmob, KXM, Tooth & Nail etc....)