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Topic: Friend w/ Benefits

F W B
2/2/2021

Stepping into something,
You might not understand
Stepping into something,
Where there is no upper hand

I’ll show you fantasy,
Some things you have never done
I’ll show you extasy
But dont try to touch the sun

OH.  I.  Can’t Give you my heart.
OH.  I.  Can’t. 
    (Give you my – heart.)

Don’t go that direction
It will push me away!

OH.  I.  Can’t Give you my heart.
OH.  I.  Can’t. 
    (Give you my – heart.)

Take  what is offered,
Lets get high.
Ill take you flying
and I’ll let you cry

We both lost a lover
But not the same kind,       
I cant fill them shoes
Dont make me try

OH.  I.  Can’t Give you my heart.
OH.  I.  Can’t. 
    (Give you my – heart.)

Don’t go that direction
It will push me away!

OH.  I.  Can’t Give you my heart.
OH.  I.  Can’t. 
    (Give you my – heart.)

“Find your own sound.  Dont be a second rateYngwie Malmsteen be a first rate you”

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Re: Friend w/ Benefits

Beamer

in the words of Dylan Thomas, " Do not go gentle into the good night - rage, rage against the dying of the light !

some dark and deep messages in your lyrics.

Going to be interesting to hear it when/if it becomes a song.

Thanks for sharing

Jim     

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Re: Friend w/ Benefits

That could be the anthem of teenage angst. Well done Beamer!     

I want to read my own water, choose my own path, write my own songs

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Re: Friend w/ Benefits

Dirty Ed wrote:

That could be the anthem of teenage angst. Well done Beamer!


Thanks.  Now if I could really play it would be like Van Halen or chickenfoot. 

It’s hard to find a friend with benefits who won’t try and push it into more than it is.

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Re: Friend w/ Benefits

TIGLJK wrote:

some dark and deep messages in your lyrics

Thanks for sharing

Jim

Well it is me we are talking about big_smile.
Glad you like them.     

“Find your own sound.  Dont be a second rateYngwie Malmsteen be a first rate you”

– George Lynch 2013 (Dokken, Lynchmob, KXM, Tooth & Nail etc....)